Woahhh! The feel of this poem is just so soothing and peaceful! π Love thissss, it even reminds me of a song, and while reading your poem, that scene just flashed before my eyes.
The rhymes are perfect! And the ending paints a depressing picture. π Also, what I really adore is the incorporation of all beauuutiful elements of nature. That’s very fascinating.
Feels like I’m writing a poem review, but I can’t help itt. πΉ I appreciate art, and this poem brought a big smile on my face.
U may live in happiness as long as you live
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I guess π€¨
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Hii Bharath …
I have nominated you for liebster Award ..
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I’m glad.
Thank you.π
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Heheh, have a lovely weekend. ππ
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Sure will, π
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Woahhh! The feel of this poem is just so soothing and peaceful! π Love thissss, it even reminds me of a song, and while reading your poem, that scene just flashed before my eyes.
The rhymes are perfect! And the ending paints a depressing picture. π Also, what I really adore is the incorporation of all beauuutiful elements of nature. That’s very fascinating.
Feels like I’m writing a poem review, but I can’t help itt. πΉ I appreciate art, and this poem brought a big smile on my face.
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And your comment did that for me.
Thank you, Chandni. This kind of comment from you means a lot to me. I picked up a few fragments from you.π
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Hehe, thanks to you for writing such a remarkable poem. Didn’t know you could write so well, to be honest. πΌπΌ
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I’m glad you liked it.
It isn’t that good either but yeah, you just made my day.π
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No, this is just perfect. βΊ And, your poem made my day too. π
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And so are you.
Have a great weekend. π
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