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  1. On the first thought.. This poem would be perfection..

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    1. It’s far from perfect, Neha! You do it way better. πŸ™‚

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      1. This is perfect in it’s own way

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        1. If you say so, kiddo.😁

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          1. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜Š

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  2. gauriwalecha says:

    Beautiful poem! Short and powerful!

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    1. Bharath says:

      Thank you πŸ™‚

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  3. betulerbasi says:

    Short and powerful!

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  4. posterityunited says:

    great poem, dude!

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  5. You write sooooo well. Kyuuuuun? 😲😲😣

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    1. Bharath says:

      Because I pick up bits and pieces from wonderful writers like you.

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      1. Haan kya? I love this joke. Makes me feel special. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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        1. Bharath says:

          Joke? Joke nhi tha.😁

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            1. Bharath says:

              Nahiiiiiiiiii

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            2. Haaaaaaan πŸ‘ŠπŸ‘Š

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            3. Bharath says:

              Ab yaha bhi maarna shuru kiye?

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            4. Haan jidhar bhi jhooth bologe naa, I’ll appear and beat you. πŸ˜ΉπŸ˜ΉπŸ‘Š

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            5. Bharath says:

              Jhoot! Lo boldiya!

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            6. Andddd, I’m here again. πŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ™€

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            7. 😣😣😣😣

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            8. Bharath says:

              πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

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  6. sanikakendhe says:

    Good one πŸ’™

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    1. Bharath says:

      Thanks Sanika!
      How’re you today?

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      1. sanikakendhe says:

        Happy as usual πŸ˜„

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          1. sanikakendhe says:

            🀣yess !!
            What about you ?
            Negative ?

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            1. Bharath says:

              A bit of bothπŸ˜‚
              This poem felt negative??

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            2. sanikakendhe says:

              🀣
              Nope …!
              It’s good !

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            3. Bharath says:

              It’s both positive and negative.
              I thought you’d complain😜

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            4. sanikakendhe says:

              I thought of !

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            5. Bharath says:

              Then please do, I’m all ears. πŸ™‚

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            6. sanikakendhe says:

              Were you waiting for my comment ?

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            7. Bharath says:

              Not exactly but I do expect a feedback. You’re one of the few to point out flaws. πŸ™‚

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            8. sanikakendhe says:

              Ohhhhh !
              It is good..!
              For the first time I didn’t felt that it was negative 😊

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            9. Bharath says:

              Now that’s more like it.
              Thanks. πŸ™‚

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            10. sanikakendhe says:

              My pleasure ✌️
              Vaise…where do you stay ?

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            11. Bharath says:

              I’m from Hyderabad.
              Aap?

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            12. sanikakendhe says:

              I m from Maharashtra ,Thane

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            13. Bharath says:

              And what do you do?

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            14. sanikakendhe says:

              I m in first year .

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            15. Bharath says:

              Graduation??

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            16. sanikakendhe says:

              Yup !
              And you ?

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            17. Bharath says:

              I’m a HR executive.
              Engineering student??

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            18. sanikakendhe says:

              Nope computer science student !

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            19. Bharath says:

              Oh okay! πŸ™‚

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            20. sanikakendhe says:

              Hmmm
              Aapko toh sir kehena padega !

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            21. Bharath says:

              Arey nahi!πŸ˜‚
              Itna bhi budha nhi hu
              Call me Bharath.

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            22. sanikakendhe says:

              Buddha ko thodi sir Bolte hai !
              Aap humse bade ho tho sir hi bolna padega 😊

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            23. Bharath says:

              Koi zarurat nhiπŸ˜‚

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            24. Bharath says:

              Bas naaaa😫

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            25. sanikakendhe says:

              🀣🀣
              Sir we are honoured to have you ..!
              Apka Dil bohot bada hai ki aap “sir” ye title Nahi Lena chahate 🀣🀣🀣

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            26. Bharath says:

              AreyπŸ˜’
              Dil mera bohot chota hai
              Bolna mat na

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            27. sanikakendhe says:

              Okay okay …
              Just kidding !!!

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            28. Bharath says:

              Han HanπŸ˜’πŸ˜’

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            29. sanikakendhe says:

              🀣🀣🀣🀣

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            30. Bharath says:

              Hasrhe?πŸ˜’πŸ˜’

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            31. sanikakendhe says:

              Sorry ..!
              Bura laga ?
              Mai aise hi mazak Kar rahi thi .

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            32. Bharath says:

              Shush! Sorry nai bolneka.
              Mazak ho toh tha.
              Bura nhi laga😊

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            33. sanikakendhe says:

              Then okay !
              Merko laga Bura laga

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            34. Bharath says:

              Ye negativity chodo aap😜

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            35. sanikakendhe says:

              Ohhhhh !!!
              Accha …!πŸ˜‚

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            36. Bharath says:

              Sikho humse kuch😎

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            37. sanikakendhe says:

              Okay …zarur !

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            38. Bharath says:

              Good girl. πŸ™‚

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  7. Very nice poem Bharath. πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘

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    1. Bharath says:

      Thank you, bro!😊

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