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    1. Bharath says:

      Thank you πŸ™‚

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  1. Ohhhh…superb..quite paradoxical!

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  2. jim- says:

    Quite a complement β€”her love is shallow water everyone has waded through.

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    1. Bharath says:

      Nobody waded through, it’s summertime. It’ll rain again. πŸ™‚

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    2. jim- says:

      Or a mirage? Hell I don’t know.

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  3. Hawww! I hope you knew how to swim back to the shore, or had life jacket or something, huh? 😬
    Btw, this is very nicely done. I love how you’re able to narrate stories in such tiny poems. β™₯

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    1. Bharath says:

      There’s happiness in drowning, ma’am. Aur han, humse bade bade poem likhe nhi jaate jaise aap log karte hai. I will get there someday.

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      1. πŸ˜’πŸ˜’
        Chhote poem me khush raho na. I will get where you are someday.

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        1. Bharath says:

          Kyu? Me nhi likhu bade poems?πŸ˜’

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          1. Dummm hai toh likhke dikhaaao. 😹😹😹 Mai challenge karti aapko. Chalo.

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            1. Bharath says:

              I accept defeat.πŸ˜‘

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            2. Nahi naa. 😐 Accepting defeat is after one tries. Aap toh kiye bhi nai. Likhhhhho na.

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            3. Bharath says:

              Nai hhoga madam!

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            4. Huh. Bas fir, chhote poem me hi khush rehna seekho. πŸ˜’

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            5. Bharath says:

              Han seekhlengeπŸ˜‚

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            6. Yipppeee πŸ™†πŸ˜Ή

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            7. Bharath says:

              Han khush raho

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            8. Jyada hi huu. πŸ˜„

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            9. Bharath says:

              Maar khaane ke nakhre.

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            10. Aap khaaaoge maar, mai nahi. 😺

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            11. Bharath says:

              Dekha jayega.

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            12. Dikhayenge hum. 😹

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            13. Bharath says:

              Ready for you, sis!

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            14. Three, two, one, Go! 😼
              Punches ki dukaan aarahi bro. πŸ‘ŠπŸ‘Š
              Seee, tiny poem banayi mai. 😹😹

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            15. Bharath says:

              🀣🀣🀣🀣

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            16. Hanso, aur maar padegi. πŸ˜ΌπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘Š

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