Cold.


Her beauty rivalled

The glaciers and valleys

Her depth was that of

An ice Berg

Anger, an avalanche

Cold was she

Frozen were the waters

So was her heart

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  1. jessierenea says:

    Good one!! πŸ’™

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    1. Bharath Upendra says:

      Thank you! How’ve you been?

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      1. jessierenea says:

        You’re welcome & good! Thanks for asking! What about you?

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        1. Bharath Upendra says:

          I’m good too. πŸ™‚

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          1. jessierenea says:

            That’s great!

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            1. Bharath Upendra says:

              See you around then

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  2. Aaah OMG that’s beautiful 😍

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    1. Bharath Upendra says:

      I’m honored, milady. πŸ™‚

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  3. Ooohhh!! Icy poem, huh. Like a metal ka sword slicing through the heart. πŸ‘Ύ The ending is toooo cold. Was she a snow-woman? β›„

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    1. Bharath Upendra says:

      Han the cold never bothered her anyway.πŸ˜›

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      1. Huh, but you be protected please. Wear sweaters and handgloves haan. 😹😹

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        1. Bharath Upendra says:

          Boots aur goggles bhi hai ab toh!

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          1. Haaaan, stay away, or you’ll catch a cold. 😹

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            1. Bharath Upendra says:

              Aaatchooo!

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            2. Naaaaaiii! πŸ™€πŸ™€

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            3. Bharath Upendra says:

              *cough* *cough*

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            4. Bhaiya chaai peelo. 😿

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            5. Bharath Upendra says:

              Han behena peelunga.πŸ˜‚

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            6. Sardi mitaaaao. πŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘Š

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            7. Bharath Upendra says:

              Arey ye koi ad thaπŸ˜‚

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            8. Haaan? Meko toh wo yaad aaya, melody khaao khud jaan jaao. πŸ˜†

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            9. Bharath Upendra says:

              🀣🀣
              Jao khao

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            10. Ji zaruuuur.😺😺

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