Bird in water


Sail away, little birdie

The skies have abandoned you

Times change, don’t you see?

Tears won’t do you no good

Through these waters,

Make your way

Hang on tight,

Don’t you wither away

The sapling has fallen

It’ll take you home

Follow the tide

Until there’s no hope

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    1. Thank you so much!!

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      1. gauriwalecha says:

        My pleasure! 😊

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  1. triarianiindah says:

    Did you follow my blog?
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  2. Anupriya K says:

    Beautifully beautifully pennedπŸ’―

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    1. Thank you 😊

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  3. And when there’s no hope, jump in the water, okay little Birdie? Learn to swim. 😼

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    1. Maybe that’s what it’ll do.😜

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      1. Yesss, it needs to face this cruel world. πŸ‘Š

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        1. Woi toh antar tha
          ‘until hope ends’
          The world is hopeless 😁

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          1. Ohho, you’re very careful with words. 😹

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            1. I’m careful not to spread any positivity or negativity. Jo hai wo batana hai.😊

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            2. Positivity toh spread kar sakte hain. πŸ˜’ This poem looks positive naa if you look duur se.

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            3. Neutral hai ji
              It’s what you make of it 😊

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            4. Haanji 😺

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            5. Bhai sahab. Bas kijiye. 😾

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  4. 😊
    Thank you for sharing..!

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    1. Thank you for reading!
      I always appreciate your presence. πŸ™‚

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  5. Such a sweet poem.. I totally loved it..! 😊

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    1. Aw thank you, Neha!😁

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