Just see


There’s this trap, you see

When you fall,

Can’t snap out of it,

All those comforting words

Do nothing but mislead

Why do you look elsewhere

When I wait for you right here?

Why are you blown away

By someone who was never there?

When the sweetness wears off, my dear

I’m scared you’ll be all alone,

And I can do nothing but shed a tear

Make haste, don’t lean

Run away, you have no idea

What you stepped in

22 Comments Add yours

  1. Kamalika Dey says:

    Well written!πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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    1. Thank you πŸ™‚

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      1. Kamalika Dey says:

        My pleasure😊😊

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  2. Antsafanou says:

    This poem just described my daily life.

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    1. 🀣🀣🀣

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  3. Just see, how many hearts you have touched.
    Just see, for how many inexpressive minds you wrote.
    Just see, how miserably I fail to praise you.
    Just see, how I am trying to make it hilarious, but could not!
    * Hahaha *
    But seriously, nice one.

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    1. Hahaha! You’re awesome, kid.
      Thanks. πŸ™‚

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      1. I know that. It does not need a mention.
        * pride overload *
        You are welcome! * smiley *

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        1. Absolutely agree. πŸ™‚

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          1. Do not be so nice Aadi maanav
            I am not used to this!! * laughs at herself *

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            1. You’re anth maanav.😑

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            2. Don’t make up anythingπŸ˜‚

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            3. Too late. Already did.

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            4. Yeah I did got late with the reply. You’re permitted only this time!

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            5. Oh I’m forever grateful.πŸ˜‚

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  4. Very powerful! I actually felt shivers run down my spine whilst reading this! Looking forward to more of your posts!

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    1. Thank you, introspective scribbler. πŸ™‚

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      1. No need for the thanks! You can call me KritiπŸ™‚

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        1. Oh, hey Kriti! πŸ™‚

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    1. Thank you πŸ™‚

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