Closer


Let me touch

I don’t mind, neither do you

Let them watch

With their eyes, so crude

Grab my hand, turn around

I’ll take you in, let’s make that sound

A wicked desire eats my mind

Feed it love and be my shrine

The fire in me, awaits your wind

Raw emotions, the sweat and skin

Sparks fly around, we got the friction

We reach higher ground,

Away from contradiction,

Bodies intertwined,

We are perfection

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    1. Thank you πŸ™‚

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  1. Voluptuous!
    I definitely agree with all, a part 2 please!

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    1. I’ll try.
      I actually didn’t know how to end this but posted anyway.

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      1. Yes sure.
        The times when you don’t know how to end a post, its actually the best. No second thoughts, everything is raw and the way it’s meant to be, perfect.

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        1. Thank you Priya. πŸ™‚

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          1. You’re very welcome, Bharath!
            * smiley *

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  2. Lily_el says:

    Love it❣️

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    1. Thanks. 😁😁

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  3. ᡏᴼᡏᴼ says:

    😲pffftβ™‘….. πŸ˜‰

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    1. Hehe! What!?πŸ˜›

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      1. ᡏᴼᡏᴼ says:

        eeeee_____ did you wake up with the intention to purify any daring eye, soul, and mindβ€’β€’β€’ΨŸΒ‘

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        1. I got no intention to purify.
          I’d rather go for impurity.😁

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          1. ᡏᴼᡏᴼ says:

            ____ letting contradiction to get higher

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            1. What do you suggest?πŸ˜„

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            2. ᡏᴼᡏᴼ says:

              wasn’t my intention to make some sound, yet I’ve been grab by these playful words and I’m waving with and in between_____ bowing front of master πŸ™Œ

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            3. Well, I’m waving back at you.πŸ˜›

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            4. ᡏᴼᡏᴼ says:

              aaaaaa____ me, conjugated at imperfect, β€”
              while you, at perfection, ended your line 😜

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            5. Ouch! Ouch!
              That hit hard.

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            6. ᡏᴼᡏᴼ says:

              and you’ve been rose up
              inspired again and again
              and again____ 😱✨ TY πŸ˜‰

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            7. I grab your hand
              Rise up again
              Make my way
              Until we meet again πŸ˜‰

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            8. ᡏᴼᡏᴼ says:

              touchΓ© πŸ–€πŸ’›

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  4. Woahhh! Sensual poem, huh? 😻 Why so short? I wanted to read more. I love that line where you said, “The fire in me, awaits your wind”. So deeep. Teach me how to write these wale poems. 😹😹

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    1. Haha! I could go no further.πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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      1. Please naaaa. Closer Part 2. Extraa closer. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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        1. Haanji haan
          Koshish karenge naπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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          1. Don’t be modest. 😹 Ye koshish woshish nai. I know aapko aata hai aage ka. Ekdum achhe se aata. Likhho huh. 😼

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            1. Par na thooooda time chahiyeπŸ˜‚

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            2. Faaaaine, take it. 😼

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            3. Lunga hi 😎

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        2. gauriwalecha says:

          I agree!
          We want part 2πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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          1. Hehe, we do. πŸ˜›

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            1. Like hell you do. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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            2. Like Heaven na. Mai Angel hu. πŸ™„

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            3. I was always Angel. Bas wo kaam devil jaise karti 😈😾

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            4. Acha? Toh me devil hu.😎

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            5. Aap nahi bann sakte. You’re too kind for that. 😺

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            6. Ask anyone! Me kind nhi.
              Rude hu.

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            7. Wo occasionally na. Kisi aur se kya poochhna, I’m a victim of your rudeness myself. ☺☺

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            8. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
              Acha? Me Kya Kara?
              I always gave you respect.

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            9. You know what you did. 😈😾

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            10. Wo rude kaha tha???
              Maine Bola na ji aapko wajah bhi?πŸ˜’

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            11. Haan haan. I know. But aise kaun karta hai? Are you feeling better fir abb? Shaanti mili? πŸ˜’

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            12. Aapse kuch nhi hai ji, I swear. I had to do it for myself. Han abhi abhi set horha hai sab. I’m slowly regaining my peace.

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            13. I know. 😞 Huh. Jab battery 100% hojaye toh let me know.

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            14. Pakka. Aap hi pehle. πŸ™‚

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            15. Pinky promise? 😸

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            16. Hanji pinky promise.

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            17. Yippeee! πŸ’™πŸ€—

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            18. gauriwalecha says:

              How about pestering Bharath to write one? 😁

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            19. Mere bhaiya ko pareshan nahi karo. 😞 Only I do that.

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            20. Hahaha!
              Dekho toh!!🀩

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            21. Ek toh aapki team se koi aaya hai. Thankyou bhi nai bolna. 😧

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            22. Thank you behna😊
              Hamesha see mere side ho

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            23. Aage bhi rahenge na. 😼

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            24. Shukriya ji πŸ™‚

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            1. gauriwalecha says:

              Kyun chup? πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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            2. I think you have work to do

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            3. gauriwalecha says:

              Well
              Of course, I have work to do!
              But my to-do list has a very special mention today, “Irritate Bharath” 😁😁

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            4. Acha!? Bring it on.😎

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            5. Kisiko kaaam tha naaaaπŸ˜›πŸ˜›

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