Barren was this land,

Eroded soil and forgotten emotions

A life lived in vain

The sky forever cloudless

That’s when you came,

Along with rain

And everything changed

The soil is fertile

And now I can feel pain

34 Comments Add yours

  1. Nathi says:

    These words they remind me of someone who walked into my life too. Beautiful❤️

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    1. I hope things are okay now..

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      1. Nathi says:

        Their absence is deeply felt but I guess I’m okay.

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        1. That’s exactly how I feel, sis.
          I miss them a lot but I’m not going back.

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          1. Nathi says:

            Burning the bridges, once and for all✌️

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            1. My bridges are burning now.😎

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  2. Very nice and meaningful words.

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  3. gauriwalecha says:

    Some people just turn our life around, all the way to the core of our being!! 🤔

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      1. gauriwalecha says:

        I don’t see any emojis in this reply! 😐

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        1. Because I didn’t use one, duh.😂

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          1. gauriwalecha says:

            Oh god! I would have never figured that out! 😱

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            1. Be thankful, lass for I’ve enlightened thee.

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    1. I’m glad you did 🙂

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  4. Tanusri sen says:

    And it is life…

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  5. I can hear a plaintive sigh. 😕

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            1. I didn’t know what to say. 😁

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            2. Waah! Kya baat hai!
              * laugh *

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            3. Koi baat nhi, woi baat hai.
              *Laughing louder*

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            4. * slow claps with a smirk *

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            5. Have a good day 🙂

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            6. Have it better than mine! * smiley *

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            7. Now it’s my turn to
              Awwwwww

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