Giving up


Can’t you see it in my eyes?

Don’t you know

How much I tried?

Lost count of the times I’ve cried

Judge me if you must

Now I’m tired

Everything that I had for you

Has now dried

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    1. Thank you! ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. lionsdor says:

        ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ˜˜

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        1. You translated it to French?

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          1. lionsdor says:

            Yes, I translated and I find this wonderful article, like most of your articles. Thank you

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            1. Thank you, man, it means a lot to me. It’s kind of new looking at my piece in another language.
              Thanks again.

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            2. lionsdor says:

              thanks to you

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  1. Mathew Philip says:

    ๐Ÿ–โ˜บ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜

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  2. Don’t worry buddy! I hope you find your light soon! You’re worth it!๐Ÿ˜Š

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  3. I feel attacked by this post, this hits a bit too close to home

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      1. Don’t worry i mean the metaphorical one, I don’t think blogs can literally attack with weapons… yet..
        Ignoring my stupid jokes, what I meant is it is too relatable, and reminds me of certain problems of my own

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        1. Oh ish!
          I’m sorry, Kriti, one shouldn’t relate to things of this sort. I hope things Are ok now.

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          1. I hope the same for you Bharath, no one should go through such things.

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            1. Aww thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

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            2. You are welcome! (from Kriti’s behalf)
              Hehehe!

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            3. Ye Kya hora hai???๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

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            4. Arerey ye ‘meri marzi’ bohot sunne ko milta hai aajkal. Kaisi marzi, huh?

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            5. Come on, I don’t use it as often, huh!
              It is my wish to say welcome, samjhe!

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            6. Han Han! Samjhaa!
              Ek se badhkar ek.๐Ÿ˜‚

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            7. Aur kya, hum kisi se kam nahi!

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            8. Han Han bilkul, foreigner jaisi Indian ladki.

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            9. Bas bas, ask Kriti, she knows me very well!

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            10. How can I ask Kriti?๐Ÿ˜‚
              I don’t know her as much as I know you (which is nothing) so I’d better ask you.

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            11. Literally nahi! * face palm *
              * laughs *
              True that you do not know me. hehe.
              Here comes my standard dialogue – “You are hopeless and helpless!”
              * laughs again *

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            12. Hehehe!
              *I hope for nothing and I don’t need help*๐Ÿ˜›
              *Laughs too*

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            13. Wow! You just ruined my dialogue by switching it the other way round. Thanks!
              * you were not supposed to laugh *

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            14. I just said the truth. ๐Ÿ™‚
              *Still laughing*
              *You’re welcome*

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            15. Yeah thanks priya, I guess?๐Ÿ˜‚

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            16. I saw your email today, sorry I didn’t notice it pehle๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜˜

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            17. This was a very intriguing conversation, though unnecessary๐Ÿ˜›.

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            18. Yeah these tend to happen a lot with me.๐Ÿ˜›

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            19. Hey it was funny, so I’m not complaining๐Ÿ˜‚

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            20. Not that you’re complaining, I was just saying the truth.๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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            21. After all, priya is a very unpredictable and…. random person. (Not gonna say anything more, I don’t wanna get beaten up on the first day of school)

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            22. I wouldn’t dare know any further.๐Ÿ˜‚

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            23. Yeah that’ll be fine by me๐Ÿ˜‚โœŒ๐Ÿป

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            24. You better not! Huh!

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            25. Nah. You have an idea of what I am by now.

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            26. No idea! I will get idea!
              * play the mobile network advertisement *

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            27. Thanks for this beautiful praise, Kriti!
              Also for exaggerating to the level of a physical fight!

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            28. Aww love you too darling, after all, if best friends are meant to be teased๐Ÿ˜‚โค๏ธ

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            29. Fine dear, I won’t speak from now until it is necessary.

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            30. Omgg drama queen, calm down๐Ÿ˜‚

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            31. Wait, am I a drama queen?
              Come on, I am very quite in general and you know this too!

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            32. Yeah you are very quiet and calm, but sometimes you do get over-worked๐Ÿ˜‚ remember when we went out and there was a guy on the streets with a whip(I guess that’s what you call it?) ๐Ÿ˜‚

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            33. Because that guy was not normal! You get that!
              The truth is, if you see them hitting themselves and then have an eye contact with them, you are supposed to give them money.
              I have witnessed an incident where a lady was whipped badly because she refused to give money.

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            34. I don’t think that’ll happen in an urban area with people around darling don’t worry๐Ÿ˜‚
              (let’s not start a conversation in his comments and use the mail instead๐Ÿ˜›)

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            35. Girl, I saw this at nerul station!!!
              (sure)

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            36. Last year, around this time of the month.

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            37. Fine.
              * woah! still laughing!? *

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            38. #wordpress ka raavan

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            39. Aur tum Ravan ki behen๐Ÿ˜Ž

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            40. This means my new name is Shurpanakha!!!

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            41. Haha! Now that’s my sister!

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  4. Nice depressing post. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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    1. Aapko toh pata hi hai me khushi ka post nai karsakta.

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      1. Ji ji.
        Rhymes firse kharab.
        Eyes tried cried dried TIRED ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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        1. Zindagi kharab hai jiiiii

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          1. Jaisa person waisi uski zindagi. ๐Ÿ˜ธ

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            1. Han me kharab hi hu

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            2. Ji ekdum hi ๐Ÿค—

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  5. sanikakendhe says:

    Omg …!
    Sometimes such situations help to gain patience on life …!

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      1. sanikakendhe says:

        I think you have surely gained it …

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        1. Hope? No I lost it.

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          1. sanikakendhe says:

            Look ….adjusting to new path and a new direction will require new skills and strenghts.
            Every time you will gain something …and every time you will loose something.

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            1. Well true that, Sanika.

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            2. sanikakendhe says:

              Thank you …. โœŒ๏ธ

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  6. My heart is burdened with pain again.
    * deep sigh *

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    1. A round of badminton would help.

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        1. Wherever you wish to.

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            1. If there’s any mistake from my side, I’m sorry.

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            2. No no, I didn’t intend anything like that. Oh lord! Do not be sorry, okay?

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            3. You never sounded this sad so I thought maybe…

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            4. How did you know that I am sad?!?!

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            5. I don’t know, I just felt like it. Your comments too..!

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            6. Oh then it is fine. Let it be. =)

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            7. If you say so.

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  7. Nathi says:

    Hold on Brother, things get better!

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      1. Nathi says:

        Maybe not yet but youโ€™ll get thereโœŒ๏ธ

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        1. Maybe, sister, maybe.

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  8. Antsafanou says:

    I guess it took you all your courage to write this. This is beautifully written . good job ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

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