Wrong time


Something written

In the wrong time

Read it, brethren,

It has no rhyme

The song of silly crimes

Written as the bell chimed

A mouse ran from the inside

Of the house, escaping the cat’s glide

The mad dog howling

Since the middle of the night

A shadow crept in,

Avoiding the light

It stayed in the corner,

Hiding in plain sight

Little did I know of my plight

Days now aren’t being fine

Woke up with blood shot eyes

That lady’s being nice

Her fingers caress my hair

And strangling, her delight

Leave me be, woman,

I’m aware of your pretention

Heeding the wrong advice

Open your mind, what do you see?

Is it him? I hear you talk

But in his voice

When you set sail to his shore

Don’t look back, I will be gone

I called you once, I asked you twice

You shall be far before it’s thrice

41 Comments Add yours

  1. Laleh Chini says:

    Beautifully written.

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    1. Thank you. πŸ™‚
      How’ve you been?

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      1. Laleh Chini says:

        Thanks a lot dear, working hard on my second book. LOL

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        1. Oh! Great news there. πŸ™‚

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          1. Laleh Chini says:

            Thank you so much dear.

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    1. Thank you πŸ™‚

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  2. Read it Brethren,
    It does have rhyme. 😻
    I love this huh.
    So fieryyy. πŸ˜†

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    1. Haha thank you bhenji 😁

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      1. Bhenji aur thank you ek hi sentence me. 😾

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        1. Han toh kya😁😁

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          1. Take it back. πŸ˜’

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            1. Behen ho toh bolunga hi naaa

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            2. Bolo fir. Aapke thankyou ko fan se latka dungi. Aur fan on kardungi. πŸ˜ΌπŸ‘Š

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            3. Aadat hai ab toh

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            4. Aadat toh hui atleast meri cheez kiii. πŸ˜„

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  3. A series of pictures just flashed through my mind and conveyed a relentlessly unsmiling story.

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    1. Stitch those together, hang them up the wall, add fire to the frame and smile as they burn.😌

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      1. I smiled as it burned
        Wondering when will time turn
        There was nothing I could learn
        Nor a blessing I could earn.πŸ˜”

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        1. Count your curses
          Stay obsessed
          Cut those fences
          Know you’re blessed

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          1. Yes I’m blessed
            Yet always pressed
            Cementing to be stressed
            All I’ve got is wrest

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            1. Yours is a tale of woe
              watching the sorrow grow
              Break free from the flow
              About time you know

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            2. People say go with the flow and you are telling me to break free from the flow!!
              * bad joke aka doesn’t makes sense *

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            3. Go with the flow and learn how to break it.😎

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            4. Only when the need arises.πŸ™‚

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            5. I hope it does.

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            6. Life is locomotion.
              If you’re not moving, you’re not living.
              (The flash)

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            7. I better try and move on the pleasant path, no matter what it costs.

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            8. I’m watchin’ya.

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            9. * watching me whip and nae nae? *πŸ˜›

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            10. Woopsies! Okay.😁

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            11. Hehehe…
              Good girl.

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  4. gauriwalecha says:

    I love how you painted the scene in my head! Sir ji! Kya likhte ho! Waah waah!🀩

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    1. Haha I’m the painter painter

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      1. gauriwalecha says:

        You’re the daunting ranter… Mr. Banter!🀣

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        1. Yes, miss quill.

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  5. Antsafanou says:

    now I can see the full picture :), well written, well expressed πŸ™‚

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    1. Haha! Do you?πŸ˜›

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      1. Antsafanou says:

        :), I see it clearly.

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