Way


Whistling winds sang along

And I walked my way

On the roads lonely and long

“If you’re not weak”

I heard him say

“You can’t be strong”

I searched for the place

Where I belong

So many eyes, words

Waving hands and

Hard goodbyes

Still waters, silent hills

Naked skies and snakes on road

Whatever I see, wherever I go

Every drop of sweat lets me know

There is no end, there is no hope

“Keep going, mate,

There’s everything and nothing

You got to lose.

29 Comments Add yours

  1. I still can’t decide, was this positive or negative. πŸ€”πŸ€” Such a complex poem. Samjhi hi nai.

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    1. Ye beechme latkane wali poem hai πŸ˜›

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      1. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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  2. Nour R. says:

    You know you’re a pessimistic when you read the last two lines and think that you could lose your life in the way, which is mostly everything. Oh God πŸ˜‚

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    1. I am pessimistic as hell.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

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  3. Kanisha says:

    Fab! πŸ’•

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    1. Thank you ☺️

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  4. DAMN!πŸ–€ Lines 4, 5, and 6!!( if they were numbered😜) Sooooo good Bharath. πŸ™ŒπŸ™Œ

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    1. Hahha! They are numbered now.πŸ˜‚

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  5. Fantabulous Bharath. very Well written.

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    1. Thank you brother. πŸ™‚

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      1. Honour is my dear friend. Be blessed.

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  6. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸŽ–

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    1. Medal of Honor??😁

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        1. I’m not dead yet.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

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          1. Only The Shadow really, really knows for sure!

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            1. Now I’m skeptical.

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            2. Be skeptical of your own skepticism!

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            3. I’m going on a sabbatical.

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            4. Me? I’m going to write a skeptical post!

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            5. I’m looking forward to it.

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            6. the post is there…

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  7. Tanya says:

    Love it ! 🌸✨

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  8. Sid says:

    Beautiful 😍😍

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    1. Thanks man! πŸ™‚

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