Incomplete.


Down the road, up the hill,

Chasing ghosts from memories

Reaching out

To those tangible melodies

Your footprints are in the sand

I Fill my feet in from behind

Walking the path, being washed away

By the waves that came from nowhere

There’s a voice calling me,

“This way leads you into the deep;

Wake yourself up!” It screams

“Ain’t no life being buried within!”

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  1. Nour R. says:

    Maybe your death is the ending to this ‘incomplete poem since you didn’t listen to the ‘voice’??

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    1. Oh it might be, Nour.
      Can’t say for sure; you may be right.
      Yeah, I don’t listen to the voice.

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      1. Nour R. says:

        I’m always right. 😀

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        1. Now now! Let’s not be overconfident.🤣

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          1. Nour R. says:

            Man, I hate those people who think they’re always right. Their minds aren’t right 😞

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            1. Ahem!!!
              Wait. What???🤣🤣

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            2. Nour R. says:

              *shrugs* I’m surrounded by them. It’s pretty annoying.

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            3. Nour surrounded by Nours.
              Damn! That’s one hell of a surrounding.🤣

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            4. Nour R. says:

              Wonder how the world is still standing. Must be because I’m distracted 😄

              Ma3 elsalameh (Bye!)

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            5. Tell me how to pronounce it before you leave!

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            6. Nour R. says:

              مع السلامة.
              Put that in Google Translator and hear it out. There isn’t an alternative letter for the 3 in ma3 in English so ☺

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            7. FiAmanIllah 😁

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            8. Nour R. says:

              Bravo 😂

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  2. Mermaid says:

    Well, this is really something!

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    1. Something incomplete.😁

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      1. Mermaid says:

        That’s why it is more beautiful.

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        1. Hehe! Thank you. 😁

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  3. Riiiise and Shiiine.🤗😝

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    1. Someone’s about to get yelled at.

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    1. Wakey wakey, Stephanie!

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  4. Explain to me. 😊

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      1. Nai summary bataao. 🙄 Upar upar se nai samajhna

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        1. Har line incomplete choda Maine
          Dekho na

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          1. Haan dekhaa. You’re incomplete without whom? 😼 Zara hum bhi jaanein.

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  5. “Chasing ghosts from memories ”
    Amazing and deep poem bharath
    The poem itself is saying so many things .
    Very nicely penned 😍😍👍👍

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    1. Thank you Prakriti.
      This is an incomplete poem which I failed to write an ending for.😅

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      1. It’s my pleasure
        I know that its incomplete but then also I just loveddddddddd itttttt 😍😍😍

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        1. I’m glad you did.
          Thank you. 🙂

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          1. It’s my pleasure 🤗

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