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  1. Shivani. says:

    Wonderful!🌸

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    1. Thank you πŸ™‚

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  2. Ahaaan! First line ko second pe rakhdete toh kya mast rhyme aata na. πŸ™„ Very meaningful post. You’re encouraging the trend of borrowing things from others by writing this poem. πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘Š

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    1. Kya borrow Kiya Maine πŸ˜’

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      1. Moon ki izzat toh borrowed light se chalti na. πŸ˜’ Unke paas khudka kya hai. Kuch nai.

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        1. Arey Matlab sun ki importance jaanne keliye moon ko dekhna padega naaa Aisa kaha tha maine

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          1. 😼😼 Ohh! Samajh gayi. And moon refers to scars, haina? What if a girl has no scars because wo NoScars cream lagaati? πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Tab kya karoge?

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            1. Hahahah sitaare dekhlunga πŸ˜‰

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            2. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
              Golden Foundation lagaake bhej dungi mai usko.

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            3. Aapke paas aane kaun degaπŸ˜‚

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            4. Bhabhi rahegi meri. Aise kaise nai aayegi. 😾 If future Bhabhi is somewhere around here, let me tell her I have machine guns and bombs. ☺❀

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            5. Filhal me single hu abhi

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            6. ‘Filhaal’ na. Aage ka kisko pata. 😸

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            7. Meko kaun dekhegaπŸ˜’

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  3. I’m a little bit confused in the last two lines. I have understood the first two. Are you comparing yourself with moon and stars or something else ??

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    1. I’m saying you can’t separate one from another.

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      1. Ohhk now I have got it .
        So great and deep lines ahead, BB πŸ˜ŠπŸ’™

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        1. I’m glad you did.
          Thank you.

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          1. It’s my pleasure 😊

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