Hunter was he, always solo. He enjoys power when wild beasts groveled in pain at his feet. It was just another sunny afternoon when he got off his work and walked into the woods with his tools expecting a wild boar as a bounty.
Whistling his way into the green lush, the hunter marched ahead; the deeper he went, the lifeless it looked. Not one quadruped passed by, instead his stomach growled more fiercely than a lion and hunger howled louder than the wolf.
Amidst the silence of the world and noises of his mind, he heard a woman crying in pain. Tens of metres later, he finally reached the woman, dressed in a fine saree, face covered by both her hands, sobbing bitterly.
“What is this, lady? What’s bothering you?” He asked.
“My husband and his family, they’ve disowned me. I didn’t know where else to go.”
“Okay. Let me go and talk to them first, just stay here and wait for me. Don’t go anywhere.” He said as he slowy backed off and started walking towards the village.
There was something peculiar about her feet. They weren’t facing him but the tree she was leaning on instead.
“Where the fuck are you going? You’re supposed to help me! Come back here!” A voice roared in agony as he now started running towards the road.
“Come back here! Give me my family . Come back!”
The hunter ran.
Until the echoes were lost in the woods.
Until his mind has lost the voice.
Mmm I hope he died.
=)
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Yes. Of old age.🤣
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SMH where are my murders at xD
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What you’re gonna get are spiders.😛
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I have no place for fear anymore xD
I literally was about to faint from relief and nerves. I’ve never fainted in my life!
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Tell me your worst nightmare.
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To do a wrong and not apologise for it. It’ll stay engraved for years.
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Something I can deliver, please?😛
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As if I’d admit to that?
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Nah but I have a few ideas.
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Enlighten me about ’em?
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It’s a carefully guarded secret.
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Fione xD
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Woah !
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Hehe! You get it?😁
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Yes
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Thanks 😊
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What a great story, thanks for sharing.
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Thank you
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My pleasure.
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What a cliffhanger! Wanna know what happens next. Or is the story complete? In that case you’d be the Indian Franz Kafka. But I am still not able to understand the story bcoz feet have another meaning in Europe. At the river Rhine, for example, is a fable where a fairy puts her foot through the ceiling of a castle while the castle’s owner is having his wedding feast, and the foot is announcing his death within the next 3 days.
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Her feet were facing backwards. it signifies a ghost here. This happened back in the mid 80s when superstitions were rampant.
The story is complete. 😊
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Ah ok, so it’s indeed similar to the European fairy tale (foot coming through the ceiling without leaving a material trace is of course ghost activity)🙂
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Now that’s something new.
Thank you for yelling me. 🙂
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Wooh !! A little gruesome 😮😮
But your writing was just amazing keep up with your work, bharath 💚
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Thank you Prakriti. 😁
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😨😨😨 This story gave me chillls! You’ve written this so well huh. Horror stories likhna start kardo. 😮
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Ye Kahani nahi Sach hai 😐
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🙄 Aap hunter the ya chudail?
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Ye me nhi tha
Bohot badi Kahani hai
Me bataunga baadme
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Haaan, batana meko kaun hai ye. 😼👊
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Thodi der me.😁
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😛 Kal batana huh.
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