Do not be the moon
Hiding parts of you
In the dark;
Don’t be the sun,
Shining bright,
I can never see you
With a naked eye;
Don’t be a star
Fading with the night;
Don’t be the clouds
Changing shapes
Always fleeting by;
Just be here,
Still and serene like
The yellow skies.
I’ve a doubt!
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Yes ma’am?
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Ma’am?🙄
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Yeah. ma’am. 😛
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No. Sir😜
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Please explain me the last two lines.🙂
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Commitment and consistence is what I meant.
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Ohhhhhhhhhhh…
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Hehe yeah
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Well expressed! ❤️
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Thanks 🙂
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🤩🤩
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😍😍
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Superb 👌
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Thanks man.
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Beautiful thoughts and words.
When reading, I was finishing the lines inside me myself, and the poem led my thoughts well. Only at the last line I derived:
“Just be here,
Still and serene like
Like you are.”
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Share your version too. 🙂
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I love your commonwealth thinking. 🤗
If it mishaps that I’ll have somebody, surely I’ll have a thought of your inspiration. 🌹
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Well thanks, I guess.
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