Please.


Do not be the moon

Hiding parts of you

In the dark;

Don’t be the sun,

Shining bright,

I can never see you

With a naked eye;

Don’t be a star

Fading with the night;

Don’t be the clouds

Changing shapes

Always fleeting by;

Just be here,

Still and serene like

The yellow skies.

19 Comments Add yours

        1. Yeah. ma’am. 😛

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      1. Please explain me the last two lines.🙂

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        1. Commitment and consistence is what I meant.

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  1. Anupriya says:

    Well expressed! ❤️

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  2. Mermaid says:

    🤩🤩

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  3. Benyapoesy says:

    Beautiful thoughts and words.

    When reading, I was finishing the lines inside me myself, and the poem led my thoughts well. Only at the last line I derived:

    “Just be here,

    Still and serene like

    Like you are.”

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    1. Share your version too. 🙂

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      1. Benyapoesy says:

        I love your commonwealth thinking. 🤗
        If it mishaps that I’ll have somebody, surely I’ll have a thought of your inspiration. 🌹

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        1. Well thanks, I guess.

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