Memory


Carved on trees, is my name; papers carry my words, the life has been shallow, haven’t tasted fame; you will forget my voice, when have we last talked?

Come atop the mountain, sit by the little red rock; say my name, you will see me walk

To you, I sing this song,

Let me die young.

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  1. Shruti says:

    I’ve written a poem on the same subject, do check it out

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  2. Very well written, succinct and beautiful

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  3. Mermaid says:

    Beautiful.

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  4. Nabeela says:

    I don’t have words bro….

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    1. That’s compliment enough, sister. 😊

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  5. Nameera says:

    Love this!

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    1. Nameeraaa!! Thanks. 😬

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  6. Harsh says:

    “Let me die young”
    We got some matching thoughts here!!
    Loved reading this!!

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    1. Tell me about your thoughts

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      1. Harsh says:

        I think it’s pointless to live after getting old, after a certain age. We never live for ourselves our whole life. We just do what others want, what the world wants. We try to do what they expect. I think it is better to live for ourselves, fulfill all our dreams and wishes, do everything you ever wanted to, and die young and peacefully. No one ever dies peacefully as well. So I think we should do things for ourselves. Do what we like.

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        1. Dude! Right on! We’ve been raised with lies. Finish schooling for a good life, then college, then find a job and here’s the stupidest thing they say: “work now so you can enjoy later” but what they leave out is that we don’t have time later and when we have, it’s too late because we’re old. We keep doing shit to build a life and please people when we actually have to experience life. We have to have the best when we are at our best.
          We should do things for ourselves, yes. Thanks man.

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          1. Harsh says:

            Exactly!! There’s nothing like ‘later’. It is never for us. We only have now. We can do what we want now or never again. World fed us lies and we believed them. It is up to us to live for ourselves.
            Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

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      1. Hey you seem to have skip my latest blog…

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        1. Haven’t seen your post today. Have you published yet??

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          1. Yaa I was waiting for your feedback

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            1. This didn’t even pop up on my feed! This happens too often with WordPress. 🤦🏻‍♂️

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            2. Happens but I knew it must have happened therefore I came to invite you personally 😅

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            3. And Thank you for that.

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  7. Hey you just said my comment makes you smile. Don’t get away from that… Keep smiling 🙂

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    1. I did better, I laughed. 😄

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  8. To begin from the beginning-
    The papers carry my name,
    life’s shallow without fame..
    Lit✨

    Then the question since when we haven’t talked?
    And the last and the most beautiful of all
    I sing to you – let me die young
    It was beautiful as always 🙂🙂

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    1. Y’know, I like your comments as much as I adore your writing. Never fails to put a smile on my face. Thank you.

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      1. It’s surprising to hear from you Bharath
        I wish you more smiles.
        You are a very important part of my journey 🙂🙂

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        1. Now I’m flattered. I’m glad I could make it this far, ma’am. Your name has been engraved on mine as well. Salut.

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          1. You’re part of my virtual bff’s- now…. Haha..
            Happy morning Bharath🙂

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            1. You gonna make me cry.
              A very good morning to you, too.

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  9. Anushk@ says:

    Don’t die Young..😁
    You have a lot of work to do😉

    To you, I sing this song,
    Let me die young.
    These lines were lit🔥
    This is amazing Bharath😊💙

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    1. That’s motivating. 😂😂
      Are you a life coach??
      Thank you, ma’am.
      How’s your morning so far?

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      1. Anushk@ says:

        I wish.. I was😂
        Working since morning 😣

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        1. OMG! Who’s making this girl work?? Who is it?!

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          1. Anushk@ says:

            Nobody yarr..

            Just my pending stuffs..😅 gone bit lazy this weekend

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            1. Weekends are meant to be lazy! You’re insulting the Sunday. 😄

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            2. Anushk@ says:

              Haa..true🤭
              In this quarantine..I don’t even remember days.
              Just like..I even forgot it’s Sunday today🙈

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            3. You should thank me for reminding you then. 😛

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            4. Anushk@ says:

              Definitely..
              Thank you Bharath…you saved my day😂
              Do you want any award as well?😁

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            5. Of course! Who’d refuse? A reward will be appreciated though. 😛

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            6. Anushk@ says:

              Haha…
              I guess..u will love to take reward…that I am going to give you.

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            7. What would that be?

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            8. Anushk@ says:

              May be completing my assignments😂😂

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            9. Uff! Jaao aap. Jaao. 🤦🏻‍♂️

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            10. Anushk@ says:

              Awlle😂
              Achwaa..taking my reward back..

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            11. By not completing assignments?? Bad. 😏

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            12. Anushk@ says:

              No..
              Another reward..😎

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            13. Anushk@ says:

              Have patience…Mr. Bharath 😎

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            14. I’m a really impatient person. 😂

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            15. Anushk@ says:

              Haa😁
              Check my blog..I have nominated u for an award..
              Abi yaii lelo bs😉🤞

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            16. Aur kuch chahiye bhi nai. Shukriya. 🤭

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            17. Anushk@ says:

              Have patience…again😉😁

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            18. Another award???

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            19. Anushk@ says:

              Nope…will see🤭

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            20. Now I’m biting my nails

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            21. Anushk@ says:

              Don’t..better u eat something 😂

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            22. I keep eating. 😎

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  10. WildHeart says:

    Your words are fire. 🔥🔥🔥

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      1. WildHeart says:

        Thank you so much 😊

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    1. Honoured, my good sire.

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