Do you hear me?


I sat on that old rock and spoke to the moon; There were stories to tell, ballads to sing, he was there, quietly listening. The choppy fluvials leapt with the winds, singing chorus to the birds as they passed by, flying.

There’s a lot to complain about, tonight; My words are tired of their plight. It’s foolish to think my words will ever reach you, in this world devoid of magic. Do you look at the skies? Who do you see when you lose yourself in those stars?

I’m rendered speechless; my nights are now dreamless and soul, restless like a horse running wild. Would you look at the skies?

Just for tonight?

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  1. Such a beautiful request. Choppy fluvials and restless horse wala imagery stole my heart. 😍

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    1. Hehehe you’re a fan of complicated words

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      1. And complicated people, like you bhai sahab. 🤭🤣

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        1. Me kabse complicated bangaya

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  2. Nour R. says:

    I think the moon is lonely enough to listen to whomever is asking for a conversation

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    1. That old guy is never tired.

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      1. Nour R. says:

        Except for the few days it disappears. It can no longer provide its therapeutic glances

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  3. dessertflower5 says:

    The pleasure is all mine

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  4. dessertflower5 says:

    Do you hear me? No I can’t but can read your words. Beautifully put.

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  5. You are full of beautiful and painful emotion. It’s stunning what your mind comes up with. -Lyle

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    1. Thank you so much, Lyle.

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  6. I’ll look at the skies everyday if you agree that there’s even an iota of magic out there.

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    1. So all I have to do is agree and you’d look at the sky?

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      1. I look at it everyday 😂

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        1. Now that punch was hard. 😵

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          1. Good morning to you too 🌞

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            1. Go to work now 🤣

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            2. Still an hour to go. I’m busy writing my next post.

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            3. I really admire how you manage it all.

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            4. Thank you. It’s not easy but I’ve learnt to deal with it now. 😊

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  7. aathmana02 says:

    Hey Shakespeare bro!!
    Actually this post was pretty amazing!! I loved it every bit!!❤️

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    1. Hahah! Thank you. 🙂

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      1. aathmana02 says:

        What you doing?

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        1. Like right now? I’m on the terrace looking at the sky.

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          1. aathmana02 says:

            Actually I wanted to ask HOW! STUPID ME!!😅😅

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          2. aathmana02 says:

            By the way, out of curiosity.. are there any stars up there?

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            1. Nope. Just clouds here.

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  8. This one’s amazing, idk why but I really like it.

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  9. Nathi says:

    I hear you, brother😉

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    1. Yeah but late as always 😛

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      1. Nathi says:

        Hmm your post got lost in my reader :/

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        1. Only happens to me 😢

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          1. Nathi says:

            No brother, it happens a lot these days with more people posting. I try to read often but it keeps piling up😅

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            1. That’s why I am choosy. I don’t follow too many people. 😅

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            2. Nathi says:

              But I’ve FOMO and at times end committing myself to lot more than I can handle 😅

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            3. Hahaha you go silent anyway

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            4. Nathi says:

              I value my “Me time” as well😅

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            5. A little more than the others 😂

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            6. Nathi says:

              Can’t deny that😅

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  10. Anushk@ says:

    Good morning Bharath ✨

    So, you too like being in starry nights… looking at moons and stars
    Well…who would not like.
    This is beautiful…after a long time I am seeing you with some light.
    And the last paragraph….dreamless…restless like a horse running wild…too good..!!

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    1. Good morning Anushka.
      I love starry nights. I forget everything when I look into the sky.
      Thank you so much. 🙂
      Webinar yet?

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      1. Anushk@ says:

        High five 🖐️
        Nope..
        No webinars today…

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        1. High ten! 🖐🏻🖐🏻
          So what’s on the agenda?

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          1. Anushk@ says:

            Today I have an assignment to complete…have to watch a movie…that I guess I have been downloaded by now..!!
            Have to finish a book that I am reading…

            And right now …I am listening a song…that I have heard this morning…and it has completely seized my nerves..!!
            It’s an old Bollywood song..
            Whats on other side?

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            1. Made a few calls to work and enjoying wind in the backyard. What book are you reading?
              What song is it??

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            2. Anushk@ says:

              The rudest book ever..!!
              (It’s a name of a book)

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            3. Acha Masakali.
              I know the song.

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            4. Anushk@ says:

              I am listening this after such a long time.
              So, what you are gonna watch today?

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            5. Not gonna watch anything today.
              What’s on your list?

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            6. Anushk@ says:

              Going to watch The green mile..
              Have you watched?

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            7. I love that movie. It’s a decent watch.

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            8. Anushk@ says:

              I am done watching it..!!😀
              It’s amazing..

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            9. I watched it long ago 😂

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            10. Anushk@ says:

              Arey that I know..😅
              Leave it..!!
              Whats up there?

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            11. I finally stepped out of my house after two months. 😎

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            12. Anushk@ says:

              What if I say….I too went out of my colony…while riding bike.🙈….it was dreadful though 😅

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            13. I came to another part of my city, like 15 kms from home. 😂

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            14. Anushk@ says:

              And I ..may be 600 metres 😅

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            15. That’s progress. You’re finally getting the hang of it.

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            16. Anushk@ says:

              Definitely..!!
              I hurted my ankle today while taking a turn..

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            17. You hurt your ankle? How? You fell??

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            18. Anushk@ says:

              Kind of..
              Not fell..just ankle got little twisted..
              That’s why I am little off today..!!
              But..yeah..it’s a part of learning..

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            19. Can you walk rigt??

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            20. Anushk@ says:

              Not really..
              But I’ll be fine by evening..I hope so.!!

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            21. Warm compress and rest should do.

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            22. Anushk@ says:

              Warm things never work for me.!!
              Did the cold one..it’s good to subside the swelling thing.

              I am resting only…and listening to this..!

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            23. So your ankle is swollen. You better not move. 😂
              fuck I’m lonely. 🤣🤣🤣

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            24. Anushk@ says:

              Yeah…I not moving 🙈
              This song is matching to my mood..!!

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            25. Anushk@ says:

              Yarr..this song..

              Welcome to my life…
              It seems like it’s made for me😂

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            26. Welcome to my life? Simple plan ka??

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            27. Anushk@ says:

              Yope🙈

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            28. Han suna tha bohot pehle
              Bhul bhi gaya 😂

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            29. Anushk@ says:

              Listen this now…
              And accompany me in crying 😅

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            30. Hanji I’m on it. 🤣🤣

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            31. Anushk@ says:

              I’ll talk to you later..!!
              Mumma is calling for lunch..
              Take care.

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            32. Yeah sure.
              You too.

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            33. Anushk@ says:

              Don’t miss me much😁

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            34. 🤣🤣 okay.

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  11. Tisha says:

    It’s beautiful! I often wonder if what they show in movies, that two people looking at the sky at the same time, thinking something similar, if that actually happens? Even if that doesn’t, I still love looking at the sky, especially the night sky, it feels soothing. The cool breeze, that light smell of wet soil, and the beautiful sky with the bright moon, thinking about this, feels so good.

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    1. Thank you Tisha.
      Sure, night sky is soothing, it’s like therapy for me. I don’t know if she’s looking at the sky when I am but I can say things looking the sky which i can’t to her.

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      1. Tisha says:

        That’s so true. Indeed it’s a therapy, and it’s like you can open your heart. Maybe she is staring at the sky too, remember that song “chaand sifarish jo krta humari, deta wo tumko bata…”

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        1. I wish she does. I can only wish.

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          1. Tisha says:

            No, you can write as well. Write down your feelings, and tear up the ones that make you sad, it’ll help.

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            1. That’s what I’m doing

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            2. Tisha says:

              And just stay strong. I know it’s easier said than done, but you’ll have to try. Cause that’s the only option.

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            3. Thanks Tisha. 🙂

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            4. Tisha says:

              Rock on! 👍😂

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            5. Ye hai waqt ka ishara

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  12. Nabeela says:

    I too talk to the moon, the stars, from the terrace…. It gives a good feeling that I can’t explain in words….

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    1. You too? That’s nice to hear.
      I lose myself looking at the sky.

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      1. Nabeela says:

        Me too…. And when there is slight wind…. Voww…. Best time….

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        1. There’s hardly any wind here these days. The summer is almost over and I hope the monsoon brings us the wind.

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          1. Nabeela says:

            Hope so….

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  13. Hi, are you awakkkkeeee yet?
    When you’re awake, I’m asleep, when you’re asleep, I’m awake 😑😑😑😑

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    1. Hey! I just woke up. Lemme checks the notifications and respond to comments. 😬

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        1. Let’s talk. 😎

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  14. Ish says:

    Beautiful ❤️

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  15. Beautiful melancholy… we can hear you.

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    1. Thank you from the other side of the world. 🙂

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  16. buddingb says:

    Yet another work of yours which made me smile… 🙂👍

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    1. Thanks bud. 🙂

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  17. I’ll look at the skies!!!!
    🤗Nice one, half blooded prince!
    Magical and at least its not dark and evil…. 😉😉😉 Well doneeee!

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    1. Catpaw!!
      Thank you. I’m not always dark. 😂

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      1. 😁😁😁99.9% of your blog is dark…

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        1. There’s a bright corner too.
          You won’t see it. 🤣🤣

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          1. So.. What’s happening?

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            1. I see a picture with two paws and one looks human. How is that possible?

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            2. 😂😂😂
              They’re both my cats paws on my hand. I call it cuteee!
              I just put the two pics in a collage.

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            3. Oh that’s your hand??
              I mean, Aren’t they all paws??

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            4. Lol! Zoom into the picture! I believe it’s called fingers, not paws!
              😂😂😂

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            5. I wish I could on my phone. So I brought the phone closer to my eyes but I still see paws with human fingers. Nevermind.
              What’ve you been up to?

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            6. Ohkay!
              Nothing much. Posting a lot more often. It’s 2:00am here.

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            7. And what’s keeping you awake?

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            8. Uh, life, I guess!

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            9. Okay now who’s getting dark here?

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    1. Hey there 🖐🏻

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  18. your's_Nomison says:

    mohak

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      1. your's_Nomison says:

        Its charming

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  19. PRASHANT JAIN says:

    Good

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  20. Harsh says:

    Nice!

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  21. babymughal says:

    Aacha likha❤️

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      1. babymughal says:

        Welcome

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