Breathless.


I held my breath as I walked to you;

O Girl, you take my breath away!

I held it back to save myself, to live;

For I can die

But cannot live your way.

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  1. Wow, this is so dark. She was fire!! Sab oxygen legayiiii. 😰

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    1. Aagaye shaitan 😂😂

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      1. I missed youuuu. 😿

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        1. I miss you more 🥺

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            1. Ab Kya muh latkaye ho

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            2. Ekdum se yaad aaye aap. And then I remembered aapke post me jaake kuch dhamaaal karte hain 🤭

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            3. Message karte isse acha😒

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            4. Karti hu abi kuch khane ka ban raha hai. Wo samne rakhlu laake fir text karti. 🤣

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            5. Aagayiiiii 🥳

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  2. Ending was lit!

    Good evening Bharath!

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    1. You’re late. 😛
      Good evening Rashmi. Thank you.

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      1. I know I am late. I am sorry. But here I am!

        You know I don’t go to reply back on my own blog comments first I come and check your post, Shreya ‘s post, Anushka, Sumit and then I go back.

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        1. Yeah I’m sorry to have said that. I was kidding. Thank you though. 😊

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          1. Com’on yaar Bharath you don’t have to be so formal with me. This is fact. I am always eager to see what comes from your end. I do wait for it!

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            1. I just don’t want to overstep any bounds, Y’know…..😅 I wait for yours too.

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  3. Harsh says:

    Right choice!

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  4. Anushk@ says:

    Who held your breath Bharath 🤭

    Good morning ✨

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    1. Haha there is one. 😉
      Good morning!!!

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      1. Anushk@ says:

        I hope you are fine then🤭
        Got your breath back..!!

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        1. This is someone I’d lose the breath for. But luck isn’t in my favour. 😂

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          1. Anushk@ says:

            Whoops🤭
            (Fight …Fight…Fight..!!)

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            1. Fight for what??😂

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            2. Anushk@ says:

              Someone..!!

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            3. It’s too late. There’s no response. 😂

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  5. Tisha says:

    Starting with an “Awww” ending with a “Bang”! That has become your style Bharath. Great Post! 🙂

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    1. Hahaa I’ll take that as a compliment.
      Thanks Tisha. Aren’t you writing?

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      1. Tisha says:

        That was actually a compliment.😂 You’re welcome!
        Yes I am! I was working on it, its almost done, and I’m gonna publish it now. Thanks for asking 🙂

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          1. Tisha says:

            Done! And it’s there for you to read! 🤭

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            1. I read and commented 😎

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            2. Tisha says:

              I dunno why your comment ended up in the spam😓

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            3. I’m always a spam 😒

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            4. Tisha says:

              Hey no! Why do you think so? 🤦‍♀️

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  6. BriN says:

    So tragic! Loved the final line. Xx

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  7. Kamya Seervi says:

    Wow! That’s breathtaking!

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  8. Nabeela says:

    Better option….

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  9. That’s heartbreaking. Don’t keep holding your breath for too long!

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    1. I just wrote it. I don’t hold my breath. 😂

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  10. This is so sad but written with expertise. One word to describe this : AMAZING
    Three emojis to describe this:
    😱😍😮
    Keep up the AWESOMENESS,
    X,
    Phoenix

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    1. Thanks Phoenix. Keep writing and inspiring.

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      1. Your welcome 😊
        Oh, nothing can stop me from doing that, I assure you Bharath 😂😉😏

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  11. Where do you get these ideas?! Damn this is amazing🤝

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    1. Hehe thank you 🤝

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  12. crystalandquills18 says:

    wow…

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  13. babymughal says:

    Good

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      1. babymughal says:

        Koi baat nai g

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          1. babymughal says:

            Salaam

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            1. Salam. Kya haal hai?

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            2. babymughal says:

              Wasalaam.. mathik hu ap btao

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            3. Me mast. Abhi uthe?

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            4. babymughal says:

              Han kch dairr phla .. namz parhi ooth k phr site pay active hui r ap

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            5. Me Netflix 😁

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            6. babymughal says:

              Acha kia dkhty us p

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            7. Abhi toh fauda dekhrha. Aap Kya dekhte?

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            8. babymughal says:

              Ma Netflix nai kart use. Wea kabhi aikk drama dkh lu

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            9. Ek hi? Ertugrul?

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            10. babymughal says:

              Ihate ertugrul ..mrry ghar ma dkha jata but i don’t like….

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            11. Kyu!? They say it’s really good.

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            12. babymughal says:

              Ho ga good…. But mrry liy nai…. Jo chz log passnd krn wo mjhy passnd ni aati a

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            13. Toh Kya pasand aapko

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            14. babymughal says:

              Passnd to bht kch a…. Sab s zada wo dramay jon main kisiko bht hadd tak disturb kia jay ya jis ma deewana pan h

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            15. babymughal says:

              Bassss mjgy iska song bht s b zadaaa passnd

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            16. babymughal says:

              Ok zaroor

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            17. babymughal says:

              Ma apk aik drama ka name btaao gi wo dkhna

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            18. babymughal says:

              Jee ap b btaaa dain

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            19. Aap batane waale the na

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            20. babymughal says:

              Hmmmm ma btany waali thiii … Drama name is….. Khaali haath….. 👍👍👍👍 Iska ost b 👍👍👍👍

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            21. Me google karleta

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            22. babymughal says:

              Han YouTube pay kr l

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            23. babymughal says:

              Good

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            24. babymughal says:

              Ma eid p apni photo post kruuuuu?

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            25. Aap karna chahte toh karo ji

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            26. babymughal says:

              Lakinnnnn face crop kr kkkkk

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            27. 🤣🤣🤣🤣
              Bohot acha idea hai

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            28. babymughal says:

              😂😂😂😂

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            29. Waise I was expecting this 😛

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            30. babymughal says:

              Acha wo kessay

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            31. Karne hi waale the toh puchoge kyu? Kardoge na!
              Email id tak dete nahi kisiko
              Photo kaise upload karoge 🤭

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            32. babymughal says:

              😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 bilkul sahi kaha lolllllllzzzz

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            33. Toh jo marzi karo 😂

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            34. babymughal says:

              Bharath ….. Bht hansi aa rh sach ma🤣🤣🤣

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            35. Isme hasne waali Kya baat

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            36. babymughal says:

              Sari baat e to hsnay wali a…. Mood fresh kr dia a

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            37. Hahah achi baat hai. Haso.

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            38. babymughal says:

              Nai ab bass

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            39. babymughal says:

              To tm ks bat ka gssa nikaal rh h sachi sachi bta do

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            40. Arey gussa nai hai 🤣🤣

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            41. babymughal says:

              Acha phr kia a

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            42. Maine toh bas ye kaha aapko jo acha lage karo

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            43. babymughal says:

              Acha sahiii

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            44. babymughal says:

              Lunch kr lia?

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            45. Hanji. Aap Kya karre?

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            46. babymughal says:

              Ma fasting s hu

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            47. Fasting ho pata hai

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            48. babymughal says:

              Ab aik fast rh gya ….

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            49. babymughal says:

              Mujhy na abhi firr say neend aanay laggi😀

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            50. Toh sojao na! Kisne roka??

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            51. babymughal says:

              Tmhn lagta a…. Mjhhy koi rokk sakta a😜

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            52. Hahaha wo bhi sahi 🤣

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            53. babymughal says:

              Jee

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            54. babymughal says:

              Ma soonaaay ka sch rh huiuuu

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            55. Sojao. Uthne ke baad karna.

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            56. babymughal says:

              Han zarooor….

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            57. babymughal says:

              Ma pst daal rh th

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            58. babymughal says:

              Daaaal di

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            59. babymughal says:

              Take care of yourself

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            60. babymughal says:

              Sure

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            61. babymughal says:

              Ok khuda Hafiz

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            62. babymughal says:

              🙏🤗❤️

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            63. babymughal says:

              Wessay bharath ma sach rh th… Ma svha nai tha k kabhi hm yun b baat krn g

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            64. Community hai toh baat hogi na

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            65. babymughal says:

              Hmmmmmm

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            66. babymughal says:

              Ab ap b btain koi drama

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            67. Me? Lemme think….
              Rick and morty!

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            68. babymughal says:

              Iski language hindi hai ya urdu

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            69. babymughal says:

              Aaah ok

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            70. babymughal says:

              Aj s ma b busy h jana a

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            71. Aap busy ho aaj sè?

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            72. babymughal says:

              Jeee. Abhi to nai thehar k… Parsu eid hai na…. Phr dresses ready kannay… Bazaar ka aik aad chakkar lagna abhi…. Phr mamu log b eid laay k atay

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            73. Ahh! I get it.
              Maze karo aap!

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            74. babymughal says:

              Hmmmmmm thanks

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            75. babymughal says:

              Han kch dairr phla .. namz parhi ooth k phr site pay active hui r ap

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  14. komal Ater says:

    Cannot live your way…. What does that mean?

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    1. It means we live our life our way, not like how others say.

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      1. komal Ater says:

        Okay…. It’s amazing😍👍

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  15. Don’t forget to release it though.
    This was so sad and 💔💔🖤🖤

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    1. I will release for sure! 😃

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  16. amanita says:

    😭This is so sad

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    1. Hehehe it isn’t that sad

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