Breathless.


I held my breath as I walked to you;

O Girl, you take my breath away!

I held it back to save myself, to live;

For I can die

But cannot live your way.

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  1. Wow, this is so dark. She was fire!! Sab oxygen legayiiii. ๐Ÿ˜ฐ

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    1. Aagaye shaitan ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

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      1. I missed youuuu. ๐Ÿ˜ฟ

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        1. I miss you more ๐Ÿฅบ

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          1. โ˜น๏ธ

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            1. Ab Kya muh latkaye ho

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            2. Ekdum se yaad aaye aap. And then I remembered aapke post me jaake kuch dhamaaal karte hain ๐Ÿคญ

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            3. Message karte isse acha๐Ÿ˜’

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            4. Karti hu abi kuch khane ka ban raha hai. Wo samne rakhlu laake fir text karti. ๐Ÿคฃ

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            5. Aagayiiiii ๐Ÿฅณ

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  2. Ending was lit!

    Good evening Bharath!

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    1. Youโ€™re late. ๐Ÿ˜›
      Good evening Rashmi. Thank you.

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      1. I know I am late. I am sorry. But here I am!

        You know I don’t go to reply back on my own blog comments first I come and check your post, Shreya ‘s post, Anushka, Sumit and then I go back.

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        1. Yeah Iโ€™m sorry to have said that. I was kidding. Thank you though. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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          1. Com’on yaar Bharath you don’t have to be so formal with me. This is fact. I am always eager to see what comes from your end. I do wait for it!

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            1. I just donโ€™t want to overstep any bounds, Yโ€™know…..๐Ÿ˜… I wait for yours too.

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  3. Harsh says:

    Right choice!

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    1. Thanks ๐Ÿ™‚

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  4. Anushk@ says:

    Who held your breath Bharath ๐Ÿคญ

    Good morning โœจ

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    1. Haha there is one. ๐Ÿ˜‰
      Good morning!!!

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      1. Anushk@ says:

        I hope you are fine then๐Ÿคญ
        Got your breath back..!!

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        1. This is someone Iโ€™d lose the breath for. But luck isnโ€™t in my favour. ๐Ÿ˜‚

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          1. Anushk@ says:

            Whoops๐Ÿคญ
            (Fight …Fight…Fight..!!)

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            1. Fight for what??๐Ÿ˜‚

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            2. Anushk@ says:

              Someone..!!

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            3. Itโ€™s too late. Thereโ€™s no response. ๐Ÿ˜‚

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  5. Tisha says:

    Starting with an “Awww” ending with a “Bang”! That has become your style Bharath. Great Post! ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Hahaa Iโ€™ll take that as a compliment.
      Thanks Tisha. Arenโ€™t you writing?

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      1. Tisha says:

        That was actually a compliment.๐Ÿ˜‚ You’re welcome!
        Yes I am! I was working on it, its almost done, and I’m gonna publish it now. Thanks for asking ๐Ÿ™‚

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        1. Itโ€™s amazing!

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          1. Tisha says:

            Done! And it’s there for you to read! ๐Ÿคญ

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            1. I read and commented ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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            2. Tisha says:

              I dunno why your comment ended up in the spam๐Ÿ˜“

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            3. Iโ€™m always a spam ๐Ÿ˜’

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            4. Tisha says:

              Hey no! Why do you think so? ๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™€๏ธ

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            5. Yuhi ๐Ÿคฃ

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  6. BriN says:

    So tragic! Loved the final line. Xx

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    1. Thanks ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  7. Kamya Seervi says:

    Wow! That’s breathtaking!

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  8. Nabeela says:

    Better option….

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  9. That’s heartbreaking. Don’t keep holding your breath for too long!

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    1. I just wrote it. I donโ€™t hold my breath. ๐Ÿ˜‚

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  10. This is so sad but written with expertise. One word to describe this : AMAZING
    Three emojis to describe this:
    ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ฎ
    Keep up the AWESOMENESS,
    X,
    Phoenix

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    1. Thanks Phoenix. Keep writing and inspiring.

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      1. Your welcome ๐Ÿ˜Š
        Oh, nothing can stop me from doing that, I assure you Bharath ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜

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  11. Where do you get these ideas?! Damn this is amazing๐Ÿค

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    1. Hehe thank you ๐Ÿค

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  12. crystalandquills18 says:

    wow…

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  13. babymughal says:

    Good

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    1. Shukriya ji๐Ÿ˜ฌ

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      1. babymughal says:

        Koi baat nai g

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          1. babymughal says:

            Salaam

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            1. Salam. Kya haal hai?

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            2. babymughal says:

              Wasalaam.. mathik hu ap btao

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            3. Me mast. Abhi uthe?

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            4. babymughal says:

              Han kch dairr phla .. namz parhi ooth k phr site pay active hui r ap

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            5. Me Netflix ๐Ÿ˜

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            6. babymughal says:

              Acha kia dkhty us p

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            7. Abhi toh fauda dekhrha. Aap Kya dekhte?

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            8. babymughal says:

              Ma Netflix nai kart use. Wea kabhi aikk drama dkh lu

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            9. Ek hi? Ertugrul?

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            10. babymughal says:

              Ihate ertugrul ..mrry ghar ma dkha jata but i don’t like….

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            11. Kyu!? They say itโ€™s really good.

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            12. babymughal says:

              Ho ga good…. But mrry liy nai…. Jo chz log passnd krn wo mjhy passnd ni aati a

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            13. Toh Kya pasand aapko

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            14. babymughal says:

              Passnd to bht kch a…. Sab s zada wo dramay jon main kisiko bht hadd tak disturb kia jay ya jis ma deewana pan h

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            15. babymughal says:

              Bassss mjgy iska song bht s b zadaaa passnd

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            16. babymughal says:

              Ok zaroor

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            17. babymughal says:

              Ma apk aik drama ka name btaao gi wo dkhna

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            18. babymughal says:

              Jee ap b btaaa dain

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            19. Aap batane waale the na

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            20. babymughal says:

              Hmmmm ma btany waali thiii … Drama name is….. Khaali haath….. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Iska ost b ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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            21. Me google karleta

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            22. babymughal says:

              Han YouTube pay kr l

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            23. babymughal says:

              Good

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            24. babymughal says:

              Ma eid p apni photo post kruuuuu?

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            25. Aap karna chahte toh karo ji

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            26. babymughal says:

              Lakinnnnn face crop kr kkkkk

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            27. ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
              Bohot acha idea hai

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            28. babymughal says:

              ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

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            29. Waise I was expecting this ๐Ÿ˜›

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            30. babymughal says:

              Acha wo kessay

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            31. Karne hi waale the toh puchoge kyu? Kardoge na!
              Email id tak dete nahi kisiko
              Photo kaise upload karoge ๐Ÿคญ

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            32. babymughal says:

              ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ bilkul sahi kaha lolllllllzzzz

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            33. Toh jo marzi karo ๐Ÿ˜‚

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            34. babymughal says:

              Bharath ….. Bht hansi aa rh sach ma๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

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            35. Isme hasne waali Kya baat

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            36. babymughal says:

              Sari baat e to hsnay wali a…. Mood fresh kr dia a

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            37. Hahah achi baat hai. Haso.

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            38. babymughal says:

              Nai ab bass

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            39. babymughal says:

              To tm ks bat ka gssa nikaal rh h sachi sachi bta do

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            40. Arey gussa nai hai ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

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            41. babymughal says:

              Acha phr kia a

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            42. Maine toh bas ye kaha aapko jo acha lage karo

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            43. babymughal says:

              Acha sahiii

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            44. babymughal says:

              Lunch kr lia?

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            45. Hanji. Aap Kya karre?

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            46. babymughal says:

              Ma fasting s hu

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            47. Fasting ho pata hai

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            48. babymughal says:

              Ab aik fast rh gya ….

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            49. babymughal says:

              Mujhy na abhi firr say neend aanay laggi๐Ÿ˜€

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            50. Toh sojao na! Kisne roka??

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            51. babymughal says:

              Tmhn lagta a…. Mjhhy koi rokk sakta a๐Ÿ˜œ

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            52. Hahaha wo bhi sahi ๐Ÿคฃ

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            53. babymughal says:

              Jee

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            54. babymughal says:

              Ma soonaaay ka sch rh huiuuu

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            55. Sojao. Uthne ke baad karna.

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            56. babymughal says:

              Han zarooor….

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            57. babymughal says:

              Ma pst daal rh th

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            58. babymughal says:

              Daaaal di

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            59. babymughal says:

              Take care of yourself

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            60. babymughal says:

              Sure

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            61. babymughal says:

              Ok khuda Hafiz

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            62. babymughal says:

              ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿค—โค๏ธ

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            63. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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            64. babymughal says:

              Wessay bharath ma sach rh th… Ma svha nai tha k kabhi hm yun b baat krn g

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            65. Community hai toh baat hogi na

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            66. babymughal says:

              Hmmmmmm

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            67. babymughal says:

              Ab ap b btain koi drama

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            68. Me? Lemme think….
              Rick and morty!

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            69. babymughal says:

              Iski language hindi hai ya urdu

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            70. babymughal says:

              Aaah ok

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            71. babymughal says:

              Aj s ma b busy h jana a

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            72. Aap busy ho aaj sรจ?

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            73. babymughal says:

              Jeee. Abhi to nai thehar k… Parsu eid hai na…. Phr dresses ready kannay… Bazaar ka aik aad chakkar lagna abhi…. Phr mamu log b eid laay k atay

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            74. Ahh! I get it.
              Maze karo aap!

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            75. babymughal says:

              Hmmmmmm thanks

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            76. babymughal says:

              Han kch dairr phla .. namz parhi ooth k phr site pay active hui r ap

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  14. komal Ater says:

    Cannot live your way…. What does that mean?

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    1. It means we live our life our way, not like how others say.

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      1. komal Ater says:

        Okay…. It’s amazing๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘

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        1. Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

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  15. Don’t forget to release it though.
    This was so sad and ๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ–ค

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    1. I will release for sure! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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    1. ๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ˜ฌ

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  16. amanita says:

    ๐Ÿ˜ญThis is so sad

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    1. Hehehe it isnโ€™t that sad

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