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Breathless.

Posted by Bharath Upendra on

I held my breath as I walked to you;

O Girl, you take my breath away!

I held it back to save myself, to live;

For I can die

But cannot live your way.

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  1. Chandni Asnani says:
    May 23, 2020 at 9:05 pm

    Wow, this is so dark. She was fire!! Sab oxygen legayiiii. 😰

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    1. Bharath Upendra says:
      May 23, 2020 at 9:06 pm

      Aagaye shaitan 😂😂

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      1. Chandni Asnani says:
        May 23, 2020 at 9:06 pm

        I missed youuuu. 😿

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        1. Bharath Upendra says:
          May 23, 2020 at 9:07 pm

          I miss you more 🥺

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          1. Chandni Asnani says:
            May 23, 2020 at 9:10 pm

            ☹️

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            1. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 9:11 pm

              Ab Kya muh latkaye ho

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            2. Chandni Asnani says:
              May 23, 2020 at 9:12 pm

              Ekdum se yaad aaye aap. And then I remembered aapke post me jaake kuch dhamaaal karte hain 🤭

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            3. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 9:12 pm

              Message karte isse acha😒

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            4. Chandni Asnani says:
              May 23, 2020 at 9:13 pm

              Karti hu abi kuch khane ka ban raha hai. Wo samne rakhlu laake fir text karti. 🤣

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            5. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 9:14 pm

              Jaldi aaao

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            6. Chandni Asnani says:
              May 23, 2020 at 9:32 pm

              Aagayiiiii 🥳

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  2. Untold Stories says:
    May 23, 2020 at 5:16 pm

    Ending was lit!

    Good evening Bharath!

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    1. Bharath Upendra says:
      May 23, 2020 at 5:37 pm

      You’re late. 😛
      Good evening Rashmi. Thank you.

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      1. Untold Stories says:
        May 23, 2020 at 5:42 pm

        I know I am late. I am sorry. But here I am!

        You know I don’t go to reply back on my own blog comments first I come and check your post, Shreya ‘s post, Anushka, Sumit and then I go back.

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        1. Bharath Upendra says:
          May 23, 2020 at 5:45 pm

          Yeah I’m sorry to have said that. I was kidding. Thank you though. 😊

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          1. Untold Stories says:
            May 23, 2020 at 5:46 pm

            Com’on yaar Bharath you don’t have to be so formal with me. This is fact. I am always eager to see what comes from your end. I do wait for it!

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            1. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 5:53 pm

              I just don’t want to overstep any bounds, Y’know…..😅 I wait for yours too.

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            2. Untold Stories says:
              May 23, 2020 at 6:04 pm

              * smiling*

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  3. Harsh says:
    May 23, 2020 at 2:38 pm

    Right choice!

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    1. Bharath Upendra says:
      May 23, 2020 at 2:48 pm

      Haha yeah

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  4. A Curious Mind 🙋🏻‍♀️ says:
    May 23, 2020 at 2:18 pm

    Lovely poem 😍❣️

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    1. Bharath Upendra says:
      May 23, 2020 at 2:21 pm

      Thanks 🙂

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  5. Anushk@ says:
    May 23, 2020 at 12:02 pm

    Who held your breath Bharath 🤭

    Good morning ✨

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    1. Bharath Upendra says:
      May 23, 2020 at 12:27 pm

      Haha there is one. 😉
      Good morning!!!

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      1. Anushk@ says:
        May 23, 2020 at 12:29 pm

        I hope you are fine then🤭
        Got your breath back..!!

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        1. Bharath Upendra says:
          May 23, 2020 at 12:30 pm

          This is someone I’d lose the breath for. But luck isn’t in my favour. 😂

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          1. Anushk@ says:
            May 23, 2020 at 12:34 pm

            Whoops🤭
            (Fight …Fight…Fight..!!)

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            1. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 12:34 pm

              Fight for what??😂

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            2. Anushk@ says:
              May 23, 2020 at 12:57 pm

              Someone..!!

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            3. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 1:18 pm

              It’s too late. There’s no response. 😂

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  6. Tisha says:
    May 23, 2020 at 10:38 am

    Starting with an “Awww” ending with a “Bang”! That has become your style Bharath. Great Post! 🙂

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    1. Bharath Upendra says:
      May 23, 2020 at 10:42 am

      Hahaa I’ll take that as a compliment.
      Thanks Tisha. Aren’t you writing?

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      1. Tisha says:
        May 23, 2020 at 12:06 pm

        That was actually a compliment.😂 You’re welcome!
        Yes I am! I was working on it, its almost done, and I’m gonna publish it now. Thanks for asking 🙂

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        1. Bharath Upendra says:
          May 23, 2020 at 12:28 pm

          It’s amazing!

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          1. Tisha says:
            May 23, 2020 at 12:33 pm

            Done! And it’s there for you to read! 🤭

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            1. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 12:34 pm

              I read and commented 😎

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            2. Tisha says:
              May 23, 2020 at 12:51 pm

              I dunno why your comment ended up in the spam😓

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            3. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 1:18 pm

              I’m always a spam 😒

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            4. Tisha says:
              May 23, 2020 at 1:57 pm

              Hey no! Why do you think so? 🤦‍♀️

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            5. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:10 pm

              Yuhi 🤣

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  7. BriN says:
    May 23, 2020 at 10:11 am

    So tragic! Loved the final line. Xx

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    1. Bharath Upendra says:
      May 23, 2020 at 10:25 am

      Thanks 😊

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  8. Kamya Seervi says:
    May 23, 2020 at 10:03 am

    Wow! That’s breathtaking!

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    1. Bharath Upendra says:
      May 23, 2020 at 10:24 am

      Thanks 😅

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  9. Nabeela says:
    May 23, 2020 at 9:57 am

    Better option….

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    1. Bharath Upendra says:
      May 23, 2020 at 10:24 am

      Haha

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  10. Shweta Suresh says:
    May 23, 2020 at 8:56 am

    That’s heartbreaking. Don’t keep holding your breath for too long!

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    1. Bharath Upendra says:
      May 23, 2020 at 8:57 am

      I just wrote it. I don’t hold my breath. 😂

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  11. H.R Phoenix, Author says:
    May 23, 2020 at 1:16 am

    This is so sad but written with expertise. One word to describe this : AMAZING
    Three emojis to describe this:
    😱😍😮
    Keep up the AWESOMENESS,
    X,
    Phoenix

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    1. Bharath Upendra says:
      May 23, 2020 at 6:23 am

      Thanks Phoenix. Keep writing and inspiring.

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      1. H.R Phoenix, Author says:
        May 23, 2020 at 6:25 am

        Your welcome 😊
        Oh, nothing can stop me from doing that, I assure you Bharath 😂😉😏

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  12. Tarushi Parashar says:
    May 23, 2020 at 12:53 am

    Where do you get these ideas?! Damn this is amazing🤝

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    1. Bharath Upendra says:
      May 23, 2020 at 6:22 am

      Hehe thank you 🤝

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  13. crystalandquills18 says:
    May 23, 2020 at 12:46 am

    wow…

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  14. babymughal says:
    May 23, 2020 at 12:37 am

    Good

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    1. Bharath Upendra says:
      May 23, 2020 at 6:22 am

      Shukriya ji😬

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      1. babymughal says:
        May 23, 2020 at 2:03 pm

        Koi baat nai g

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        1. Bharath Upendra says:
          May 23, 2020 at 2:09 pm

          😁

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          1. babymughal says:
            May 23, 2020 at 2:10 pm

            Salaam

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            1. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:10 pm

              Salam. Kya haal hai?

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            2. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:11 pm

              Wasalaam.. mathik hu ap btao

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            3. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:12 pm

              Me mast. Abhi uthe?

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            4. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:13 pm

              Han kch dairr phla .. namz parhi ooth k phr site pay active hui r ap

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            5. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:14 pm

              Me Netflix 😁

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            6. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:18 pm

              Acha kia dkhty us p

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            7. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:22 pm

              Abhi toh fauda dekhrha. Aap Kya dekhte?

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            8. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:22 pm

              Ma Netflix nai kart use. Wea kabhi aikk drama dkh lu

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            9. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:23 pm

              Ek hi? Ertugrul?

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            10. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:24 pm

              Ihate ertugrul ..mrry ghar ma dkha jata but i don’t like….

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            11. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:25 pm

              Kyu!? They say it’s really good.

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            12. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:40 pm

              Ho ga good…. But mrry liy nai…. Jo chz log passnd krn wo mjhy passnd ni aati a

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            13. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:44 pm

              Toh Kya pasand aapko

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            14. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:48 pm

              Passnd to bht kch a…. Sab s zada wo dramay jon main kisiko bht hadd tak disturb kia jay ya jis ma deewana pan h

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            15. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:51 pm

              Kya hai aisa

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            16. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:51 pm

              Bassss mjgy iska song bht s b zadaaa passnd

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            17. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:53 pm

              Dekhunga me

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            18. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:54 pm

              Ok zaroor

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            19. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:24 pm

              Ma apk aik drama ka name btaao gi wo dkhna

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            20. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:25 pm

              Me bataaun?

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            21. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:40 pm

              Jee ap b btaaa dain

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            22. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:44 pm

              Aap batane waale the na

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            23. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:49 pm

              Hmmmm ma btany waali thiii … Drama name is….. Khaali haath….. 👍👍👍👍 Iska ost b 👍👍👍👍

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            24. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:51 pm

              Me google karleta

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            25. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:52 pm

              Han YouTube pay kr l

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            26. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:53 pm

              Hanji

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            27. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:54 pm

              Good

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            28. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:49 pm

              Ma eid p apni photo post kruuuuu?

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            29. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:52 pm

              Aap karna chahte toh karo ji

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            30. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:52 pm

              Lakinnnnn face crop kr kkkkk

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            31. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:54 pm

              🤣🤣🤣🤣
              Bohot acha idea hai

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            32. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:54 pm

              😂😂😂😂

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            33. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:54 pm

              Waise I was expecting this 😛

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            34. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:55 pm

              Acha wo kessay

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            35. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:55 pm

              Karne hi waale the toh puchoge kyu? Kardoge na!
              Email id tak dete nahi kisiko
              Photo kaise upload karoge 🤭

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            36. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:57 pm

              😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 bilkul sahi kaha lolllllllzzzz

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            37. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:57 pm

              Toh jo marzi karo 😂

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            38. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:58 pm

              Bharath ….. Bht hansi aa rh sach ma🤣🤣🤣

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            39. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:59 pm

              Isme hasne waali Kya baat

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            40. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:00 pm

              Sari baat e to hsnay wali a…. Mood fresh kr dia a

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            41. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:00 pm

              Hahah achi baat hai. Haso.

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            42. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:01 pm

              Nai ab bass

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            43. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:59 pm

              To tm ks bat ka gssa nikaal rh h sachi sachi bta do

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            44. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:59 pm

              Arey gussa nai hai 🤣🤣

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            45. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:00 pm

              Acha phr kia a

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            46. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:01 pm

              Maine toh bas ye kaha aapko jo acha lage karo

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            47. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:01 pm

              Acha sahiii

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            48. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:01 pm

              Lunch kr lia?

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            49. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:02 pm

              Hanji. Aap Kya karre?

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            50. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:03 pm

              Ma fasting s hu

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            51. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:04 pm

              Fasting ho pata hai

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            52. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:03 pm

              Ab aik fast rh gya ….

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            53. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:04 pm

              Mujhy na abhi firr say neend aanay laggi😀

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            54. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:05 pm

              Toh sojao na! Kisne roka??

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            55. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:05 pm

              Tmhn lagta a…. Mjhhy koi rokk sakta a😜

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            56. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:11 pm

              Hahaha wo bhi sahi 🤣

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            57. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:13 pm

              Jee

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            58. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:06 pm

              Ma soonaaay ka sch rh huiuuu

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            59. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:12 pm

              Sojao. Uthne ke baad karna.

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            60. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:13 pm

              Han zarooor….

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            61. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:13 pm

              Haha theek

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            62. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:14 pm

              Ma pst daal rh th

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            63. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:16 pm

              Daalo fir

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            64. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:16 pm

              Daaaal di

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            65. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:18 pm

              Take care of yourself

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            66. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:18 pm

              Ji aap bhi

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            67. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:19 pm

              Sure

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            68. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:17 pm

              Ok khuda Hafiz

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            69. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:18 pm

              Khuda Hafiz

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            70. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:18 pm

              🙏🤗❤️

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            71. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 3:19 pm

              😃😃

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            72. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:57 pm

              Wessay bharath ma sach rh th… Ma svha nai tha k kabhi hm yun b baat krn g

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            73. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:58 pm

              Community hai toh baat hogi na

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            74. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:59 pm

              Hmmmmmm

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            75. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:50 pm

              Ab ap b btain koi drama

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            76. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:53 pm

              Me? Lemme think….
              Rick and morty!

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            77. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:53 pm

              Iski language hindi hai ya urdu

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            78. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:54 pm

              English hai

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            79. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:54 pm

              Aaah ok

              Liked by 1 person

            80. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:21 pm

              Aj s ma b busy h jana a

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            81. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:22 pm

              Aap busy ho aaj sè?

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            82. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:23 pm

              Jeee. Abhi to nai thehar k… Parsu eid hai na…. Phr dresses ready kannay… Bazaar ka aik aad chakkar lagna abhi…. Phr mamu log b eid laay k atay

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            83. Bharath Upendra says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:24 pm

              Ahh! I get it.
              Maze karo aap!

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            84. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:25 pm

              Hmmmmmm thanks

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            85. babymughal says:
              May 23, 2020 at 2:15 pm

              Han kch dairr phla .. namz parhi ooth k phr site pay active hui r ap

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  15. komal Ater says:
    May 23, 2020 at 12:28 am

    Cannot live your way…. What does that mean?

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    1. Bharath Upendra says:
      May 23, 2020 at 6:21 am

      It means we live our life our way, not like how others say.

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      1. komal Ater says:
        May 23, 2020 at 8:29 am

        Okay…. It’s amazing😍👍

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        1. Bharath Upendra says:
          May 23, 2020 at 8:54 am

          Thank you 🙂

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  16. monabaig11 says:
    May 23, 2020 at 12:19 am

    So wow

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    1. Bharath Upendra says:
      May 23, 2020 at 6:20 am

      Thank you 🙂

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  17. thebibliophilewriter says:
    May 23, 2020 at 12:18 am

    Don’t forget to release it though.
    This was so sad and 💔💔🖤🖤

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    1. Bharath Upendra says:
      May 23, 2020 at 6:20 am

      I will release for sure! 😃

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  18. WildHeart says:
    May 23, 2020 at 12:07 am

    Damn!

    Liked by 2 people

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    1. Bharath Upendra says:
      May 23, 2020 at 6:18 am

      😬😬

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  19. amanita says:
    May 23, 2020 at 12:06 am

    😭This is so sad

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    1. Bharath Upendra says:
      May 23, 2020 at 6:18 am

      Hehehe it isn’t that sad

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