I held my breath as I walked to you;
O Girl, you take my breath away!
I held it back to save myself, to live;
For I can die
But cannot live your way.
Breathless.
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I held my breath as I walked to you;
O Girl, you take my breath away!
I held it back to save myself, to live;
For I can die
But cannot live your way.
Wow, this is so dark. She was fire!! Sab oxygen legayiiii. 😰
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Aagaye shaitan 😂😂
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I missed youuuu. 😿
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I miss you more 🥺
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☹️
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Ab Kya muh latkaye ho
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Ekdum se yaad aaye aap. And then I remembered aapke post me jaake kuch dhamaaal karte hain 🤭
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Message karte isse acha😒
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Karti hu abi kuch khane ka ban raha hai. Wo samne rakhlu laake fir text karti. 🤣
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Jaldi aaao
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Aagayiiiii 🥳
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Ending was lit!
Good evening Bharath!
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You’re late. 😛
Good evening Rashmi. Thank you.
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I know I am late. I am sorry. But here I am!
You know I don’t go to reply back on my own blog comments first I come and check your post, Shreya ‘s post, Anushka, Sumit and then I go back.
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Yeah I’m sorry to have said that. I was kidding. Thank you though. 😊
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Com’on yaar Bharath you don’t have to be so formal with me. This is fact. I am always eager to see what comes from your end. I do wait for it!
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I just don’t want to overstep any bounds, Y’know…..😅 I wait for yours too.
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* smiling*
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Right choice!
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Haha yeah
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Lovely poem 😍❣️
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Thanks 🙂
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Who held your breath Bharath 🤭
Good morning ✨
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Haha there is one. 😉
Good morning!!!
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I hope you are fine then🤭
Got your breath back..!!
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This is someone I’d lose the breath for. But luck isn’t in my favour. 😂
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Whoops🤭
(Fight …Fight…Fight..!!)
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Fight for what??😂
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Someone..!!
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It’s too late. There’s no response. 😂
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Starting with an “Awww” ending with a “Bang”! That has become your style Bharath. Great Post! 🙂
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Hahaa I’ll take that as a compliment.
Thanks Tisha. Aren’t you writing?
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That was actually a compliment.😂 You’re welcome!
Yes I am! I was working on it, its almost done, and I’m gonna publish it now. Thanks for asking 🙂
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It’s amazing!
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Done! And it’s there for you to read! 🤭
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I read and commented 😎
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I dunno why your comment ended up in the spam😓
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I’m always a spam 😒
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Hey no! Why do you think so? 🤦♀️
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Yuhi 🤣
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So tragic! Loved the final line. Xx
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Thanks 😊
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Wow! That’s breathtaking!
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Thanks 😅
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Better option….
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Haha
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That’s heartbreaking. Don’t keep holding your breath for too long!
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I just wrote it. I don’t hold my breath. 😂
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This is so sad but written with expertise. One word to describe this : AMAZING
Three emojis to describe this:
😱😍😮
Keep up the AWESOMENESS,
X,
Phoenix
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Thanks Phoenix. Keep writing and inspiring.
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Your welcome 😊
Oh, nothing can stop me from doing that, I assure you Bharath 😂😉😏
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Where do you get these ideas?! Damn this is amazing🤝
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Hehe thank you 🤝
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wow…
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Good
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Shukriya ji😬
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Koi baat nai g
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😁
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Salaam
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Salam. Kya haal hai?
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Wasalaam.. mathik hu ap btao
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Me mast. Abhi uthe?
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Han kch dairr phla .. namz parhi ooth k phr site pay active hui r ap
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Me Netflix 😁
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Acha kia dkhty us p
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Abhi toh fauda dekhrha. Aap Kya dekhte?
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Ma Netflix nai kart use. Wea kabhi aikk drama dkh lu
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Ek hi? Ertugrul?
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Ihate ertugrul ..mrry ghar ma dkha jata but i don’t like….
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Kyu!? They say it’s really good.
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Ho ga good…. But mrry liy nai…. Jo chz log passnd krn wo mjhy passnd ni aati a
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Toh Kya pasand aapko
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Passnd to bht kch a…. Sab s zada wo dramay jon main kisiko bht hadd tak disturb kia jay ya jis ma deewana pan h
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Kya hai aisa
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Bassss mjgy iska song bht s b zadaaa passnd
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Dekhunga me
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Ok zaroor
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Ma apk aik drama ka name btaao gi wo dkhna
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Me bataaun?
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Jee ap b btaaa dain
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Aap batane waale the na
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Hmmmm ma btany waali thiii … Drama name is….. Khaali haath….. 👍👍👍👍 Iska ost b 👍👍👍👍
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Me google karleta
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Han YouTube pay kr l
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Hanji
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Good
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Ma eid p apni photo post kruuuuu?
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Aap karna chahte toh karo ji
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Lakinnnnn face crop kr kkkkk
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🤣🤣🤣🤣
Bohot acha idea hai
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😂😂😂😂
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Waise I was expecting this 😛
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Acha wo kessay
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Karne hi waale the toh puchoge kyu? Kardoge na!
Email id tak dete nahi kisiko
Photo kaise upload karoge 🤭
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😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 bilkul sahi kaha lolllllllzzzz
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Toh jo marzi karo 😂
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Bharath ….. Bht hansi aa rh sach ma🤣🤣🤣
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Isme hasne waali Kya baat
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Sari baat e to hsnay wali a…. Mood fresh kr dia a
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Hahah achi baat hai. Haso.
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Nai ab bass
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To tm ks bat ka gssa nikaal rh h sachi sachi bta do
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Arey gussa nai hai 🤣🤣
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Acha phr kia a
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Maine toh bas ye kaha aapko jo acha lage karo
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Acha sahiii
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Lunch kr lia?
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Hanji. Aap Kya karre?
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Ma fasting s hu
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Fasting ho pata hai
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Ab aik fast rh gya ….
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Mujhy na abhi firr say neend aanay laggi😀
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Toh sojao na! Kisne roka??
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Tmhn lagta a…. Mjhhy koi rokk sakta a😜
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Hahaha wo bhi sahi 🤣
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Jee
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Ma soonaaay ka sch rh huiuuu
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Sojao. Uthne ke baad karna.
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Han zarooor….
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Haha theek
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Ma pst daal rh th
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Daalo fir
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Daaaal di
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Take care of yourself
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Ji aap bhi
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Sure
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Ok khuda Hafiz
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Khuda Hafiz
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🙏🤗❤️
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😃😃
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Wessay bharath ma sach rh th… Ma svha nai tha k kabhi hm yun b baat krn g
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Community hai toh baat hogi na
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Hmmmmmm
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Ab ap b btain koi drama
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Me? Lemme think….
Rick and morty!
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Iski language hindi hai ya urdu
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English hai
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Aaah ok
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Aj s ma b busy h jana a
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Aap busy ho aaj sè?
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Jeee. Abhi to nai thehar k… Parsu eid hai na…. Phr dresses ready kannay… Bazaar ka aik aad chakkar lagna abhi…. Phr mamu log b eid laay k atay
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Ahh! I get it.
Maze karo aap!
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Hmmmmmm thanks
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Han kch dairr phla .. namz parhi ooth k phr site pay active hui r ap
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Cannot live your way…. What does that mean?
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It means we live our life our way, not like how others say.
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Okay…. It’s amazing😍👍
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Thank you 🙂
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So wow
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Thank you 🙂
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Don’t forget to release it though.
This was so sad and 💔💔🖤🖤
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I will release for sure! 😃
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Damn!
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😬😬
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😭This is so sad
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Hehehe it isn’t that sad
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