Stop for a minute.


Oh I’ve had women, babe. Women who looked better and kissed great but all I could give them was a heartbreak.

There’s nothing that I didn’t try, wept until the eyes dried; to get over you, move and and live my life and here you are, like every fucking time. Where were you when I cried?

Something inside me doesn’t let you go, it’s like trying to light fire in snow. All I do is complain, can’t help but miss you now. Do you give a damn? Hell no.

Maybe it’s meant to be this way, you live your life and all I’ve got is pain. Can’t you stop for a minute, listen to what I say? At least for a second, can we be us again?

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  1. Wow!!
    I’ve missed reading your words of late… Brilliant! 👍🖤

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    1. You’ve been busy, I guess. 😁

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      1. Something like that… 🤔
        Glad to be back reading again though! 👍🖤

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  2. amanita says:

    I know this feeling, bro. I have known it for seven years now.

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    1. Seven? Why sis? What happened?

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  3. Awww! It was very touching 😭

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  4. Oh this is heartbreaking 😢

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    1. Should I thank you?😅

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      1. Haha. It’s awkward. If this was fictional, you can thank me

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        1. Thank you shwetaaaaaaa😛😛

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          1. You’re more than welcome, Bharaaaaath.

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  5. Last stanza was so moving haa Bharath.
    I could never imagine something of this sort coming from you.
    It was so beautiful I must say!

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    1. Thanks Rashmi. 🙂
      I can’t stop being this guy when I rewind and go back to those memories.

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  6. ayeshamughal says:

    bharath

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      1. ayeshamughal says:

        post thik ki h kia?

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        1. Aapke questions kaha hai? Add questions that you want people to answer.

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          1. ayeshamughal says:

            ahhh … kia pchu tm bta do na? ab itna sa to help day do na

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            1. Ek kaam karo last me add karo
              “Questions remain the same”

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            2. ayeshamughal says:

              han to qustn send kro idher hi mjhy ma waha add kr dti hu

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            3. Kitne questions chahiye??

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            4. ayeshamughal says:

              jinny tmhn bhtr lagy bta do

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            5. 1. What motivates you to keep writing?
              2. How has the lockdown affected you?
              3. A random fact about yourself?
              4. What’s your pet peeve?
              5. What’s writing to you?

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            6. ayeshamughal says:

              is s oper koi heading dnni a kia

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            7. Questions for nominees:

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            8. ayeshamughal says:

              kr dia

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            9. Bohot badhiya. Aakhir kardiya aapne award post.

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            10. ayeshamughal says:

              haaan g krdiaaaa… aj main n thaan li thi k post krni hi karni h chahy gallt kiu na ho

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            11. Toh kaise kiya aapne?

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            12. ayeshamughal says:

              basss ,,,,, jab aj sch lia to kr hi di….
              bass gssa aya tha sab bloggers p kisi n hlp ni di to hd hi kannna para

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            13. Arey khud kare toh hi aayega na

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            14. ayeshamughal says:

              hmmm sahhi

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            15. Aur? Sab maze me??

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            16. ayeshamughal says:

              han maza kia… kal aik r maamu ki dth h gai covid ki waja s

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            17. Kya??? Inteqal hua? Yaar sambhalkar aap.
              Sarcasm kyu yaha bhi

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            18. ayeshamughal says:

              han g…. hmrry yaha … meey 2 cusion k b hua tha …. wo chairman hn cutlery exports k but ab wo thik h gay hn

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            19. Aap Khayal rakhiye apna

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            20. ayeshamughal says:

              jee thik r kch

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            21. Abhi bas itna hi
              Aur Kya chahiye?

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            22. ayeshamughal says:

              hahahah duaain chahin

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            23. Humko bhi yaad rakhiye duaon me

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            24. ayeshamughal says:

              achaa kia dua kru tmky liye

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            25. Kuch bhi kardo 😁

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            26. ayeshamughal says:

              hahaha ma to bass phr shaadi ki hi kru g

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            27. 🤣🤣🤣🤣 kyu? Khush na rahe hum?

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            28. ayeshamughal says:

              haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.. shaadi k baad hushian kahan jaati hnpagal

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            29. Shaadi Maut hai 😂

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            30. ayeshamughal says:

              hahahha jhoootay dill main laddu phoot rahay hn g

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            31. Jhuta dil mera nai hai 😂😂

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            32. ayeshamughal says:

              magar hai to dill e hai na

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            33. Koi nai chahiye Abhi. Akela hi theek.

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            34. ayeshamughal says:

              achaaaaa aacha thik

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            35. ayeshamughal says:

              wssa kennedy awrd hta kis baray ma mjhy ye ni paata

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            36. Arey award posts kaafi pointless hai

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            37. ayeshamughal says:

              kia matlb?

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            38. Maqsat ek hi hai
              To know the blogger better
              Zarurat nahi ke kare ya nai

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            39. ayeshamughal says:

              achaa to knsa award acha hta a name kia usak

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            40. Saare awards ek jaise hi hai. Dekhlo aap.

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            41. ayeshamughal says:

              dikhaa do ap

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            42. Isse pehle aapko Rishab ne nominate kiya tha yaad hai? Wo same hai na.

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            43. ayeshamughal says:

              han g us n kia tha,,, H,R phoenix nay b kia

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            44. Saare posts ka format ek hi hai dekho

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            45. ayeshamughal says:

              ok i will see later on,

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            46. ayeshamughal says:

              acha bharath listen,, mra laptop ki charging dead hnnnay ja rh hai charge ker k baat kru g

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            47. ayeshamughal says:

              khuda hafiz take care

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            48. ayeshamughal says:

              aah ma phr fazool ma ye post kr di

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            49. Arey aisa nahi hai
              Iske Zariye aapke baare me thoda toh jaankari milti na.

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            50. ayeshamughal says:

              han ye to thik kaha

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            51. ayeshamughal says:

              but now, i am very happy

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            52. Han finally kardiye ho.

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            53. ayeshamughal says:

              jee kr dia…. issi trha is blog s phla ma an 6 blog bnaay thy or end pay aa k ye wala blog thik bnna tha

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            54. Wah! 6 banaye??

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            55. ayeshamughal says:

              je 6…. phr krty krty mrra ye wala bloggg thik bnnn gya tha

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            56. Haha followers bhi ache aaye ispe

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            57. ayeshamughal says:

              hmmm…. ab post kru g 300 bd … chand aik kam hn abhi

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            58. ayeshamughal says:

              jee

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            59. ayeshamughal says:

              wssa aik chzzz sikhi a… try again and again till success

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            60. Han wo sahi hai.

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            61. ayeshamughal says:

              yup yup yup

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            62. ayeshamughal says:

              kisi ki post ko dkh kr bnaaai hai

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            63. Wo toh maine pehle bhi bola tha.
              Sunte kaha ho aap. 😂😂🤦🏻‍♂️

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            64. ayeshamughal says:

              ab sunn li na… at least aj to na tontttt maro aj to shaaabaaash do

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            65. Arey shabaash Ayesha! 😎

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            66. ayeshamughal says:

              hahahaah thanku

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      2. ayeshamughal says:

        agar koi galtiaan hn to abhi s bta do ma thiik kar lu

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        1. Questions add kardo bas

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  7. Awesomely written..
    But sad too…

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  8. Chetna says:

    The first two lines of 3rd paragraph and the first two lines of next paragraph!😃

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  9. Anushk@ says:

    To be human is to be broken and being broken is it’s own kind of beautiful(copied 😁)
    But in all this,
    I hope you are absolutely fine..!!

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    1. Wah bete wah!
      You know I’m better than fine.

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  10. Harsh says:

    Looks like wanting to get back together is in the job description.

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    1. Haha maybe, maybe not.

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  11. Chetna says:

    There is acceptance but denial too!!😂

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    1. What? Explain. 😂

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  12. Khwahish S says:

    Oh the exquisite pain, thou always return.

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    1. Ask and ye shall be answered
      Seek and ye shall find

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  13. Tisha says:

    This is so moving. That line “at least for a second, can we be us again?” is where we all reach at the end. That’s a wish which we hope for against all odds.

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    1. And it doesn’t happen.

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  14. your's_Nomison says:

    I felt the pain too😰

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    1. That’s bad. I’m sorry.

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      1. your's_Nomison says:

        No, it’s good that I related.
        That must have come straight from the heart.

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  15. Nabeela says:

    Move on….

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    1. Can’t a guy write about breakup without actually experiencing it? 😂

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      1. Tisha says:

        Maybe, but experience gives you the ability to portray the deepest of emotions in the simplest of words

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        1. Ahh! That’s what happened here maybe.

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  16. Amruta says:

    awesome!!!!

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  17. This is oh so moving.

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