Listen.


Don’t ask me what is wrong,
Don’t tell me what is right;
Don’t say there will be light
At the end of the night.
Don’t expect me to be strong,
Stop looking for a fight;
Within me lies
A never ending fright.

There are blacks,
There is white,
The Grays you don’t notice
Is what we call life;
You give me your time
And you will get mine,
We shall make memories
And forget, we might.

I’ll tell you a story,
We all are, my friend;
The end is the beginning
That’s beginning to end.

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  1. Last 2 lines took my breath away!

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  2. komal Ater says:

    Just wowww 😯…. But what does the last line mean?

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    1. It’s open to interpretation. What do you make of it?

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      1. komal Ater says:

        I could make anything of it…. That’s why asked….

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        1. That’s the point. 😁

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          1. komal Ater says:

            Couldn’t*…. And whats the point?

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            1. Being open to interpretation is the point.

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            2. komal Ater says:

              Areey phir bhi… Bata do

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            3. Arey matlab they remember each other’s preferences even after separation and chose to move on their own way.
              Ye ek hosakta. 😂

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            4. komal Ater says:

              Acha… Thanks… Hanji… Sahi pakde hai 😂

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  3. Anushk@ says:

    And I am loving this poem..so I saved it.

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    1. You saved it? Thank you so much. 🥺

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  4. aathmana02 says:

    Wow bro! The lines are so amazing and striking and captivating….*running out of adjectives!
    I loved it bro!

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    1. Ah that’s the best compliment from you so far.

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  5. Waaah! Mind boggling rhyming poem. Mast likhhe.
    “The Grays you don’t notice
    Is what we call life;”
    Loved thissss. 🤠
    The last two lines are so creepy. Baapre. Kya sochke likha wo!

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    1. Last two lines maine end ke baare me soch ke likha. 😛 thanks bhenji.
      Aate hi nhi aajkal blog Pé.

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      1. 😒 Thoda thoda aati huuu.

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  6. Ava Tripathy says:

    This is so Beautiful 😍😍😍

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  7. Harsh says:

    The end is the beginning
    That’s beginning to end.

    Well said!

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  8. HappySoul says:

    “The end is the beginning
That’s beginning to end.” Nice lines there ,… absolutely right ! Oh wait , dint you tell in the second line “don’t tell me what is right “ 😁

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    1. Hahaha good one there 😆

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  9. This is so beautiful Bharath and as always your endings are kick ass!! 😍😍

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    1. Haha thank you so much. How’re you doing?

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      1. I am doing good Bharath! How are you? 🙂🙂

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  10. akshita1776 says:

    This is quite deep. And I love the line where you say” the grays you don’t notice” I too had written a poem with that same gray. Although, I must add on that the sun always rises again..

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    1. Would you mind sharing the link? I’m sure I must’ve read that before.

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        1. Thanks for sharing, I haven’t read it.
          Loved how you expressed your view, simple yet profound.

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  11. Tisha says:

    This is.. Deep! Really liked it. 👍

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  12. Whoa! But as one “wise” person once told me, there will be a light at the end of the tunnel but we have to pass through the tunnel to get to the light!

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    1. Haha that’s what I said here too. Just don’t remind me of things I already know. 😛

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      1. All of us need a reminder sometimes. Also, I thought you might having a sleep-induced temporary memory loss

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        1. Nah. I don’t. Don’t worry about it.
          Do you remember you have work today??

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  13. Amazing 😍 😍 😍

    Hiii! How you doing?

    Your new profile picture is walking dangerously close to the edge of that cliff 😂

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    1. Thanks catpaw.
      Alhamdulillah. How’re you??
      Yeah that’s me on the edge of a cliff. 🤣

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      1. I’m greatt thanks!
        Wow. 😮👍👍👍👍

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        1. Hahah! What’s going on there? What’ve you been up to?

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          1. Oh.. I’ve been at home… Posting more often on my blog.

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            1. Yeah I’ve noticed

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  14. Seriously, this is great writing 👏

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    1. Learning a thing or two from you.

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      1. You make me smile. Nice way to compliment a compliment. I’ll write it down for future reference. Love your work.

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        1. Haha! Fine.
          And yeah, I adore yours.

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          1. Nawwww, bless your nihilistic heart 😏

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            1. Hey! You’re the first to say that. Thank you.

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  15. Era says:

    So good!!!

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      1. Era says:

        You’re welcome 😊

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  16. Nabeela says:

    I want to begin my life once more but lazy to live it again….🤪🤪🤪

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    1. Hahaha how would you choose to live it again if you had the chance??

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      1. Nabeela says:

        Entirely different from the one I already lived….

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        1. Clever answer 🤣

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            1. I’ll punch you for that 😂😂

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            2. Nabeela says:

              Thank you for the punch…. I appreciate your cooperation🤩🤩🤩😜😜😜

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            3. I’ll punch you again 😂😂

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            4. Nabeela says:

              Again thank you for your support….

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            5. I hate ghosts. 🤣🤣
              Want some iced tea??

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            6. Nabeela says:

              I miss Iced tea….

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  17. ayeshamughal says:

    good

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      1. ayeshamughal says:

        welcome

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  18. Nathi says:

    Damn brother🖤 But there is light at the end of the night, dawn breaks and the sun rises again.

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    1. I don’t want you to say that because I already know. 😂 Thanks sister.
      It feels good to be able to talk to you at least here.

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      1. Nathi says:

        I know you know but I’m going to say it anyway, brother😂

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          1. Nathi says:

            Maybe need a gentle reminder😏

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            1. I see that gif you always send me. 😂

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            2. Nathi says:

              I miss sending you that gif.

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            3. I’m glad 🤣🤣

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            4. Nathi says:

              🙄😂

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