I looked up to the sky and hoped for nothing.
What could it even offer? I wanted the world
Thatβs already been sold. They say it is cold
But then, you sell your soul
To faith, to work, to life and oh! Love!
Kisses, never moist, eyes, always closed;
Words so deep, voices shallow.
Freedom forever sealed in sheath,
I looked up to the sky and hoped for nothing;
It was as still as ever, something I could never be.
When you look at the sky, you don’t have to hope. It automatically blesses you with some sort of serenity. It doesn’t matter if it’s night or day, rainy or sunny; sky always gifts us peace. π¬π¬π¬π¬ππ€ͺ
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If you say so
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Very nice request to follow my blog and let me know if anything substantial which I could imorove..
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How do you write so brilliantly??
This line..
It was as still as ever, something I could never be.
Why I am able to connect to this?
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Because youβre a restless soul like me.
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Wow, this is really deep. And yes, I know I’m late to the party π
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I hate you now. π
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Oh no, don’t say that! I know you don’t mean it π
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I will mean it now.
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Oh c’mon. What did I do?! ππ»ββοΈ
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Hehehe you donβt have to do anything
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Last line!π
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Hope is truly a beautiful thing
Thank you so much for sharing π
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Thank you for reading.
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Nice one !!!
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Thanks
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I loved each line of this poem! Wow!
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Thanks sis
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wow man!!!! “It was as still as ever, something I could never be.” I don’t think anyone could be… people change, with life with experiences… some for good, some for worse. but they do!
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Youβre right. Thank you. π
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Nice. ππ
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Wow ! Good one
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Thanks
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Nice! Much appreciated and thanks for sharing
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Thanks π
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Oh my dear brother has turned into a poet!!
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Hahaha nah. Not yet.
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Donβt be so humble, brother π
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Haha Iβm not humble. Iβm rude.
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nice
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Thanks
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wlcm
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