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  1. komal Ater says:

    Too far yet so close…. Loved it…. Short , crisp and fantastic๐Ÿค˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿค˜

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  2. Chetna says:

    Seems you have experienced!?

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    1. A flood? Never. Always a drizzle.

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      1. Chetna says:

        ๐Ÿ˜…
        Safe zone, man.๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ˜

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        1. Not always ๐Ÿ˜‚

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  3. Chetna says:

    You are inviting a flood, yk๐Ÿ˜ธ
    Nothing will remain except me full of void.

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    1. I donโ€™t mind having floods ๐Ÿคฃ

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      1. Chetna says:

        Neither am I. But the aftereffects could be devastating.

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        1. Iโ€™m ready ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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          1. Chetna says:

            Flood is afraid of you, Mr. Bharath.๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜

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            1. Chetna says:

              What if you ain’t able to swim in ??

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            2. Iโ€™ll drown ๐Ÿ™ƒ

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            3. Chetna says:

              ๐Ÿ˜‚
              How will I be saved then?

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            4. Iโ€™ll rise again. ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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            5. Chetna says:

              Then I shall consider you.

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            6. An honour, milady.

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            7. Chetna says:

              ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜Ž

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  4. Chetna says:

    People give a hell about if they are aimless or what their aim is.
    They are happy when those clouds cry and while they’re holding on, people then also find the reasons to blame them.

    Hell to people! Clouds are themselves a thing if beauty, even when dark!๐Ÿ’œโœจ

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    1. Be a cloud then. Float away and rain somewhere!!

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  5. Nour R. says:

    Yknow clouds have always fascinated me. Made from water vapour and when charged with electrons they emit lightning and how the smell of rain that we love is actually ozone and how they seem so solid yet we cannot touch them. They fly low and high but never too high (and maybe that’s bc of density?). They have different colours and shapes and yet no one looks up and questions why. I like clouds more than stars for those very reasons :3

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    1. Science geek. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
      And I admire you for the very reason, how you look at things.

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      1. Nour R. says:

        I’m totally a nerd but we don’t talk about that ๐Ÿ˜‚ Aww tanks :3

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        1. Geek alert! Geek alert!!

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          1. Nour R. says:

            At least I don’t wear glasses so there’s that ๐Ÿ˜‚

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            1. Get yourself a pair. ๐Ÿ˜‚

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  6. Khwahish S says:

    You should write your banter in italic too, such a poetry vibe for someone so brutally honest.

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    1. I never thought of it. Do you think itโ€™ll look good?

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      1. Khwahish S says:

        Imagine writing Bob doesnโ€™t give a swimming fuck in italic, oh itโ€™s like drawing rugged truth bombs but in cursive, idk it looks funny cus people only expect poetry in italic. ๐Ÿ˜‚

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        1. Sounds like a really good idea. Iโ€™ll try it but then I donโ€™t know what to highlight in the other posts. ๐Ÿ˜‚

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          1. Khwahish S says:

            It depends on you, totally. For all you know people might hardly notice the italic. Itโ€™s probably just me, I like the class of it haha.

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            1. Okay Iโ€™m gonna heed your advice.

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  7. aathmana02 says:

    Small yet beautiful!
    You took that picture?๐Ÿคฉ

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    1. Thank you! Yeah, I took the picture.

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      1. aathmana02 says:

        Ah! Thought so.. that’s why it sucks!๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜‚
        (Jokes apart… It still sucks!)
        Okay.. frankly speaking..
        (No I am not gonna repeat) you are quite good at taking pictures I suppose.

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        1. I repeat, Iโ€™m not good at anything. ๐Ÿ˜‚
          Itโ€™s just a random click.

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          1. aathmana02 says:

            Oye! I didn’t praise you! I just said it was a good click. used phone?

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            1. Yeah used phone

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            2. aathmana02 says:

              Which one? iPhone nai ho saktha!

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            3. Nai iPhone nai ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

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            4. Oye! Kya ! ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

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            5. aathmana02 says:

              What? Tell me the phone you are using.. just wanted to check it’s worth!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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            6. iPhone 8 Plus ๐Ÿ˜

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            7. aathmana02 says:

              you are joking?!๐Ÿ˜…

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            8. No Iโ€™m not

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            9. aathmana02 says:

              you are kidding!๐Ÿค”๐Ÿคจ

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            10. Okay Iโ€™m kidding.

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            11. aathmana02 says:

              I knew it!
              (Are you serious? I’m just curious!)

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            12. Oh cโ€™mon now. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

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            13. aathmana02 says:

              What? Tell me the truth!
              Cuz the clarity.. it’s questionable ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฏ

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            14. Iโ€™m not telling you anything

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            15. aathmana02 says:

              Plssssss?๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ณ I will show the puppy face!๐Ÿ˜‹

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            16. Okay show me first then Iโ€™ll consider.

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            17. aathmana02 says:

              ๐Ÿ™„ puppy face emoji is not available at present! U r so unlucky !

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            18. Itโ€™s fine. Not everyone can get as lucky as you do.

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            19. aathmana02 says:

              Ah that’s right!๐Ÿ˜…

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            20. aathmana02 says:

              https://storygirl.news.blog/2020/05/12/youth-festival-2-the-start-of-something-fun/
              Click this post and then you will see an image of a puppy face. Consider it mine!

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            21. Thatโ€™s so not you. ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

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            22. aathmana02 says:

              How can you say? You’ve not seen me! Btw that girl is even more cute.. yeah you’re right! I am not that!๐Ÿ˜•
              But that’s puppy face! Consider that for now!
              Pl pl please eeeeee?๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿถ

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            23. Iโ€™m not gonna see you anyway. ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

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            24. aathmana02 says:

              That’s my only comfort!๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜…
              So I can do all sorts of crazy things!
              But that’s the puppy face..and for your kind information… I get away easily everytime doing that!๐Ÿ˜‰shush!!๐Ÿคซ

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            25. In that case, Iโ€™ll make sure we wonโ€™t meet. Ever

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            26. aathmana02 says:

              Fine with me!๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜…

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            27. Iโ€™m fine with it too.

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            28. aathmana02 says:

              Achodaaaa!๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‚

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  8. Nathi says:

    I try to shoo away โ€” the cotton candies
    Or rather the smoky mist that obliterates the yellow ball
    Hidden in plain sight, yet only the silver lining is visible.

    Just something that struck me when I thought about what to comment here.

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    1. Cotton candy flew like dandelions
      The world has turned pink
      Merging silver linings and oblivion
      A hope, a light and an ending

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      1. Nathi says:

        Hereโ€™s to the end, the breaking dawn
        And the sun that peeks from behind
        Another day has come โ€”
        with new hope, new light, new ending and beginnings too!

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        1. The dawn just broke
          And so has hope
          Days come and go,
          But would they revive hope!?

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          1. Nathi says:

            A Phoenix rises from the ashes
            Announcing the revival of hope โ€”
            This is the new age, a new world
            This is your chance โ€” to rise & shine!

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            1. I put my dancing shoes on
              With red and yellow socks
              Hope is the new song
              But Yโ€™know I am a stone

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            2. Nathi says:

              Donโ€™t fool yourself by thinking youโ€™re a stone
              Instead youโ€™re the stonemason
              Youโ€™re no dancer but you get to
              Bring out the best in a stone.

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            3. Iโ€™ll continue later sis ๐Ÿ˜‚

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            4. Nathi says:

              Iโ€™ll be waiting brother๐Ÿ˜‰

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  9. Antsafanou says:

    Ur comments are very nice to read

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    1. You were the only one missing. About time you came back.

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  10. Wow! This is so beautiful. Welcome back to the World of Light, Prince of Darkness. Good morning, Bharaaaaaath!

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    1. Finally some light eh? ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
      Good morning Shwetaaaaaa!
      You are sooo abseeeennntttt

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      1. Yes. No, I’m not! I was just a little busy ๐Ÿ˜…

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          1. So what’s up?

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            1. Ready for work. Ssup there?

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  11. Bharath, this is so well written. Amazing work. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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      1. ๐Ÿ˜‚ You’re welcome.

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        1. Iโ€™m glad Iโ€™m welcome, mate. ๐Ÿ˜›

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          1. You gerber ๐Ÿ˜†

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            1. Oh! craving for babyfood?? How about some cereal?

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            2. Oh man, you seriously make me laugh ๐Ÿคฃ
              I’ll pass, but thank you ever so much for the laugh.

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            3. Iโ€™m not sure if you laughed for real but yeah, careful while crossing the road, secrets. Look both sides. ๐Ÿ˜‚

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            4. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ I’m not sure I like looking both ways, but thanks for the suggestion.

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            5. See you around. ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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  12. Those aimless souls looking for something more.

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    1. What could it be??

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      1. Something that would make them happy or just bring a smile on their face

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          1. Dreams when they are fulfilled!!

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            1. You gave me an answer ๐Ÿ˜‚

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            2. And why wouldn’t I ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

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            3. Yeah why wouldnโ€™t you? I shouldโ€™ve guessed. ๐Ÿ˜‚

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            4. Sure sure ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‚

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            5. Morning sister. ๐Ÿ™‚

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            6. Anyways u r quite early I see aha!! Goodnight, my bed is waiting for me, my eyelids are closing, goodmorning to u!!!!
              I hope u have a super awesome fab day at work, u made me smile with that comment anyways fun fact I don’t have a brother or for that matter no siblings gn bahut neend aa rahi hai ๐ŸŒš ๐ŸŒ ๐Ÿ˜ด ๐Ÿ’ค ttyl

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            7. This is my usual time and Iโ€™m on leave today. Sleep tight.

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            8. Oh!! Ok that is awesome that u r able to get up early, I just can’t ๐Ÿคทโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿคทโ€โ™€๏ธ yah!! I slept like a hog today, just woke up good morning or rather say good afternoon

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            9. Well, good. Good afternoon.

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            10. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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  13. This is fabulous! You know what, I think I’m the cloud in the top right (the very dark one filled with……..rain?)

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    1. All the clouds are gonna rain. So the top cloud on the right is you??

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  14. Era says:

    Beautifully penned!!!

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    1. Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. Era says:

        Anytime โ˜บ

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  15. Harsh says:

    Indeed.

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  16. HappySoul says:

    The dark clouds i sent indeed reached you !

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    1. They did yesterday. Why so late though??

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      1. HappySoul says:

        Aimless , slow clouds do take time !

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        1. You shouldโ€™ve sent quicker ones.

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          1. HappySoul says:

            May be I would have seen different lines here then? Oh you they move those determined souls….. steady n swift ? โ˜บ๏ธ

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            1. Haha okay fine!! You win. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

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            2. HappySoul says:

              Wow !! I win I win I win ๐Ÿ˜„

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            3. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

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  17. Kamya Seervi says:

    I’m a cloud?? ๐Ÿค”

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      1. Kamya Seervi says:

        Aimless soul, sounds like me ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฃ

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        1. Youโ€™re just a kid. Iโ€™m the aimless one. ๐Ÿคฃ

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          1. Kamya Seervi says:

            What does that have to do with anything? I’m still aimless…

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            1. It has everything yo do with that. You can afford to be aimless.

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            2. Kamya Seervi says:

              True, but I’m very near to the point when I’ll have to have an aim.

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