Escape


In the corners of my mind, along the borders undefined hide the thoughts as my consciousness slowly dies. Whatever cries inside, whatever lives despite, when nothing goes right, wait for tonight and I try; try to run out of sight.

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  1. For once, don’t run. Maybe staying is better…

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    1. How would that help?

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  2. Bharathhh the ending, I wish I had words to tell you how wonderfully you end your blogs!

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    1. Rashmiiiii! Thank you so much!

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  3. Kamya Seervi says:

    Don’t forget to take some essential things with you, like money, food and water. I don’t want you to die while escaping. Also, if you want me to plan an escape, I can help you do that.

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    1. You plan escapes?? Okay give me a plan.

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      1. Kamya Seervi says:

        Just pack up the things you need and love. Then, escape from your house in the dark and run away to a hill nearby. Set up your camp, and live there forever 😂

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        1. Forever?? Nice. 🤣🤣

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          1. Kamya Seervi says:

            Wait, you can be nomadic too 🤣

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          2. Kamya Seervi says:

            From one hill to another 🤣

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  4. Chetna says:

    How far did you make it?

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  5. akshita1776 says:

    The first line👌

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  6. Anushk@ says:

    Whatever cries inside…when nothing goes right..!! These lines speak volumes.
    I’m hinged to it. It’s beautiful Bharath.
    (Bharath kaha hai?)

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    1. Thank you Anushka. Let go of it. 😃

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  7. Powerful ❤️ may you one day not feel a need to escape 🙏

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    1. Thank you. 🙂

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  8. Nawazish says:

    The first line is really good!

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    1. And the rest is bad? 🥺

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      1. Nawazish says:

        I don’t know🙃

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          1. Nawazish says:

            Understand what you want🤦‍♀️🤷‍♀️

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            1. Tell me what you meant 🥺

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            2. Nawazish says:

              Nothing😊

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  9. Great thoughts of your mind.. sleep well undercover! ❤️ Cindy

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    1. Thanks ma’am 🙂

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