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I should’ve been there. I know.

It should’ve been my T shirt, not your pillow that soaks up your tears; should’ve been my ears not the walls that hear. The pavement that I sit on isn’t cozy, Y’know.. my face rests in my palms, I’m restless. The stillness of this moment has me perturbed. I apologise, but tonight, we cry alone.

I open my moist eyes to crescent moon, blurred by memories of you; it aches for me to say, leave me alone, leave me astray for I am a wild one; I make my own way.

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  1. aathmana02 says:

    🤔you should’ve been there!

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  2. Chetna says:

    The pavement isn’t cozy and your face rests in your own palms…and yet you know that you should have been there for your tees to soak the tears and your ears to hear the screams!! You are restless and the moment is still.
    You cry and still you also apologize.
    Your eyes are moist by her memories and still you manage to say..
    Leave me alone!

    Like really?? Speechless to praise it dada.🤐

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    1. We’re always alone. No matter what.
      Thanks bhenji. 🙂

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      1. Chetna says:

        Call me whatever but not this!🙏🤕

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  3. long time to wordpress and got time to read finally. Your page has chained me. For many more to come that has story to tell, ……………………..an anxious wait.

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    1. So you finally decide to drop by eh? Where have you been?

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      1. been thinking about options that 2020 presented, Now when finally i have solved them, i am back here to read, the thoughts and the wandering minds.

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        1. You solved your problems? Wow! Help me out with mine. 😂

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          1. AHmm its just a myth i try living with, lol ……kinda a booster. Still. DO dm me on insta, telling me about your problem. Even I want to know a person who is doing well on wordpress and professionally is stuck with what?

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            1. You think I’m doing well on wp??

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  4. ronnimac87 says:

    Beautiful

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  5. Bulbul says:

    Ahh *sigh* Only if ‘should haves’ were easy.

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    1. They will be eventually

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  6. Anushk@ says:

    You’re never going to cry alone remember that.
    (Don’t forget the treaty)

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    1. Oh you have no idea, girl.

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      1. Anushk@ says:

        I’ve all the freakin’ idea! You just don’t notice.

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        1. What can I say? I’m always distracted. 😂

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          1. Anushk@ says:

            Yes you’re!🥺

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            1. Anushk@ says:

              Tu taan saddi care ni karda🥺

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            2. Han ni karda. 🤣🤣

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  7. This is next level beautiful.
    Some days I don’t understand what to comment, and somedays I cannot comment because your post leaves me dumbstruck.

    This is so emotional. I wish people in real felt the kind of emotions the protagonist felt. And not just for writing. I could imagine it all in front of my eyes.
    Wow Bharath like seriously WOW.

    And now since you not so good at taking compliments, you can just smile!
    Have a happy day ahead!

    P.S- I seriously wanna write a version to this. It’s really really heartfelt.

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    1. Anushk@ says:

      Haina Rashmi! I’m glad he posted this 🥺
      (Bharath is blushing now)

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      1. I was equally glad.
        Seems like Bharath listens to us😅 good boy!

        I so wanted to write this blush thing Anushka😂, I am glad you did! And he so cannot fake a blush to us!

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        1. Anushk@ says:

          Now he must be searching for a pillow to hide his face but he can’t find that in office so Bharath keep blushing now…. we’re watching!😁

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          1. Anushka kaha hai????

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          2. Haha it’s so much fun to even imagine that 😅

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        2. I am always a good boy. 😎
          Dono ke dono shaitan ! Bhago!

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          1. Haha, hm to nhi bagenge😄
            Tumhe pareshan karenge.

            Haina Anushka?

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            1. Pehle free hojao tum. Busy insaan.

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      2. Chup! Bilkul chup! 😂

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    2. It feels so good read a long comment from you. I’m rarely triggered like this.
      You wanna write your version?? Freaking do it!!

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      1. I’ll go for it.
        No matter how I end it, but I am really tempted to write it down!

        God, I so loved what you wrote!

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        1. I’ll be waiting for yours.

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  8. Very strong emotions. Aching, yet strong. Very well done!

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  9. HappySoul says:

    Just make your own way!
    Well penned Bharath

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    1. Yeah I’m counting on it

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  10. Sounds like you’re missing someone quite a bit Bharath, if I got the interpretation right?
    Don’t cry wild one, pick up the phone. Nicely done. ❤️ Cindy

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    1. Not quite but yeah, a bit, maybe. 😃

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      1. Oh fess up 🤣 hugs sent 🤗🤗🤗

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        1. Aaahh! Okay! You caught me there. 😂

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          1. Trapped.. lol! 🤣

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  11. Lia says:

    Aw Nephie this is gorgeous!! 💘💘

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    1. Thank you auntie. How’s everything?

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      1. Lia says:

        Soooooo much better than a couple of weeks ago. thank you… :)) how bout you? xoxo

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        1. Your couple of weeks have become mine. 😂(I mean, not so good but I’m fine)

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          1. Lia says:

            😥 I am so sorry to hear that… but am glad you are “fine.” I’m sending big hugs, a hair-ruffle and smooshy-cheek pinches 😚💕🤗💓

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            1. “I’m fine” is my constant. Thanks again, aunt Lia.

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  12. Nawazish says:

    That’s beautiful bharath! “It should’ve been my T shirt, not your pillow that soaks up your tears; should’ve been my ears not the walls that hear.”❤

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    1. Thanks Nawazish! It’s hard typing your name.

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      1. Nawazish says:

        Awwww! Typing yours is hard too but kya kare naam hain🤷‍♀️

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        1. Han Han theek hai. How about Zish??

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      2. I go with Nawaz if that’s ok with her? but she’s cheating you you…LOL

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        1. Nawaz is a masculine name though. 😂🤣

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          1. NO!!! It’s a charming short name and YOU have to spell it out always.. now that you said that! Right Nawaz?
            ❤️

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            1. Haha it might be charming but it’s not female 😂

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  13. Nathi says:

    Damn! So moving, heartfelt and sincere words ❤️

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    1. What brought you here, sis? 😂😂

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      1. Nathi says:

        WP notification 😂

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