Alive.


Tear through my tissues
Sever my nerves
Push in deep
Pull it out, I won’t weep
Look me in the eye
Tell me it’s okay
Tell me I’ll live
Let me bleed

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  1. Anushk@ says:

    This is painful 🥺
    It’s okay Bharathhhh!!!

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    1. I know it’s okay 😂😂

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  2. Nathi says:

    Ugh…that was gruesome, brother!

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    1. Betrayal is gruesome

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  3. Halbarbera says:

    A live and bleeding heart…

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    1. Bleedin’ and pumpin’

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  4. Nice choice of words. Kind of felt like a machine with emotions✌

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    1. Hehe machine with emotions? I like that. 😀

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      1. Hahha we are all falling into this line man… We humans will eventually fall to become machines with emotions

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          1. Hahha well most of us are

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  5. When you want to weep but you can’t……Now that’s being Alive.

    👏🏻👏🏻

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    1. Pain. It makes you feel alive.

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  6. Nawazish says:

    You’ll die of shock…..blood loss through bleeding😉

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      1. Nawazish says:

        You’ll be cold and cyanosis too

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        1. I wish I knew more medical terms. 🥺

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  7. Lia says:

    Wowzers nephie… got a glimpse. Good writing
    Hugs from auntie. 💛

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      1. Lia says:

        Take very good care of yourself m’dear 🤗 or what I mean to say is, your sense of humour and lovely smiles make a big difference around here. 💛💛

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        1. Okay, ma’am I will, thank you. But where did that come from? 😅

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          1. Lia says:

            I was worried for you… Wrongly I guess :)))

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            1. I’ll be fine, aunt Lia. Don’t worry. 🙂

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            2. Lia says:

              Yay. 🙂 I’m glad for that. :)) I hope I will be too 😆😉😚🙏🤓

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