I walk on water with a candle in my hand. The candle doesn’t light my path, neither does it give me warmth. It’s a dark, dark world. The sweeping winds try to smother the littlest light I’ve got but we hold on. I walk towards the horizon; they say it’s where the world ends. Night after night, death after death we hope for another life, another day. I dare not look downward, for the depth of sin is deeper than the deepest trenches. I long for land. A land of sun, a land of stars, of moon and stars and hopes, dreams and promises.
This is so good Bharath. This is one of my favourite now😍
So many brilliant lines.
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Aww thank you so much Anushka
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Hmm…
I think I see something.
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And what’s that??
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Change…
Optimism in you, and pessimism in me.
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We’ll see about that
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Btw, I think I know what I’m gonna call you.
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What is it ??
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Chetta
PS- I know it isn’t creative, but I really want to call you this. 😊
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Chetan?? Brother In Malayalam??
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Yeah 😂
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Very well 😃
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Oh, so you like it?
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Nothing new in it, you could’ve just called me bhai but okay, if you like it so be it.
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Oh, I can call you bhai 😄
That’s better! I’m gonna call you bhai now. 😊
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Yeah I wonder what took you this long to figure that out.
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I was confused, plus I’m weird, so it’s not my fault, ok?
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So many self proclaimed weirdos here 😂
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Let me own the truest quality I have 😂
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Yeah sure. Why not. 😂
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Someone’s toh searching for beauty on Earth.
Ah, the beautiful land of promises!
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Hehehe what’s wrong with that! 🤣
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Nothing’s wrong, just a little different to hear from you.
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The next one’s nothing like this
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So something is on its way, interesting.
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It’s a short post. Boring too.
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You don’t write long post Bharath, you write concise and sum up everything.
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It’s basically pointless. You’ll see.
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Let’s wait for it then.
I too scheduled somethin’.
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You’re on a roll!!
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Always 😎
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And most of all how have you been. Long time no see
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Been good. How’re you?
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Fine would do injustice.
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Haha! What’s justice then?
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I’ll tell you, justice is when you make me laugh on things that I’m deprived of.
Please tell me you got what I’m talking about.
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We’ll talk about it over phone call 😂
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I am all set😂😂
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Tell me when and I’ll ask for one
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Anytime, I’m always up for it😅
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Now. 😃
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I miss you guys already.
Sure!
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I miss you too.
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I thought we’ll all get on a call today, I was waiting 😶
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Anushka is busy 😂
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I know.
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You walk on water so you’ll beat the depths of despair no matter the sins and the light
of sun, a land of stars, of moon and stars and hopes, dreams and promises will set you free.
Lovely poem Barath❤️
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Does it look and sound like a poem??
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i think so… lol!❤️
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In that case, thanks. 😃
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you’re so welcome!❤️
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What a beautiful write up Bharath … “depth of sin… “ that’s an awesome line!
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Lazy hands 😛
Thanks ma’am
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And you’ll reach that land as soon as you wake up as this a dream( You can’t walk on water)
Nonetheless, great work done on this one!!
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I’m up already. (It was a metaphor)
Thank you. 😃
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I understood that, just messing around
And my pleasure
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Haha okay
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Oh my god!! This is beautiful. Just wonderful. Keep up the good work, nephie 🤗🌻
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Thank you auntie. 😀
How’re you today??
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I am feeling awesome today, thank you, and in part due to your smile. 🤓😃 How are you??
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You have mastered the art of flattery, aunt Lia. 😂
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I don’t know about that. It was sincere… however I do see that you have mastered the art of evading questions, Bharath. 😇
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I’m okay. See? I answered your question. 😂
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I should probably learn to answer the same way more often. :))
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Oh no! Don’t say that. Pretty please??
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Ah, ok. :)) (Smiling) 🌷
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And you did just that 🤦🏻♂️
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Yep. 🙄
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❤️
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😃
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Wow, this packs such a powerful punch. Great work Mate!
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Thanks mate
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“I dare not look downward, for the depth of sin is deeper than the deepest trenches”🤩🤩
Faith is blind and hope is another sign of hopelessness. Well penned babua😀
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Only you get what I intend to say. How do you do that??
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Haha! Well I am smart😎
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Confidence dekho inka
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Aapse seekha😎
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Hatt
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Hurrrrr
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Kya tha ye 😂😂
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Aapke hatt ka reply🤣
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Chal udd jaa udd jaa phurr phurr
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Is that a song?
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Yep
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Faith is blind for a reason, often if we knew what was in front of us we would not take the first step.
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Its all about hope.
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And hopelessness.
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Yeah they come hand in hand
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🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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😃😃😃
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The imagery is awesome, brother! Well penned as always ✨✍️
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Thanks sister 😃
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Always my pleasure brother 😄
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