Loneliness.


I swallowed stars to water my dreams, I shrunk the skies & fit them in my eyes with hopes buried underneath. Grass and trees grow on my fertile skin and the sun burns within (me). I inhale and exhale storm winds; the climate, sometimes calm, sometimes pouring. Thoughts run wild and free, clouds are fleeting; I wait here for what has no physicality nor a meaning.

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  1. Diana says:

    Well, I am mad for imagery in poems. This one is awesome!!! ❀️❀️❀️❀️

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    1. Thank you Diana πŸ˜ƒ

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  2. akshita1776 says:

    I agree with HS and Nawazish. You are practically the whole universe

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  3. This was really lovely with great metaphors Barath! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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      1. You’re most welcome!

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  4. Sameera says:

    Another case of internal climate change πŸ₯Ί

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      1. Sameera says:

        Save Bharath😌

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        1. Bharath is beyond saving.

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  5. I read it so many times, Chinna. Loved it!
    But why am I imagining you smoking weed in a godly appearance? πŸ˜€

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    1. Hahaha your imagination sucks πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
      Why though???

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      1. hoooooooooooo! idi idi idiiiiii. My imagination is the best!
        May be cos of the inhaling and exhaling of the storm winds πŸ˜€

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        1. Come and idi if you can. Yeah the storm winds gave me respiratory problems.

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    2. HappySoul says:

      🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣

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      1. πŸ˜€ What do you think, HS? Do you think my imagination sucks?

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        1. HappySoul says:

          No way!! I’m humming tunes here … β€œdum maaro dummmmmm” imagining Bharath 🀣

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          1. And Smoking weed???

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            1. HappySoul says:

              Exactlyyy 🀣

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            2. I stopped smoking weed

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            3. HappySoul says:

              Smoking weed is not in my to-do list … smoking cigar was! And it was a horrible try 🀣.. my dad had helped me! Can you believe that??

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            4. Hahaha I don’t believe you

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            5. HappySoul says:

              Honestly !! My mom was pissed with us! I’ve tried champagne too with him .. his mantra is … to check off things in bucket list.

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            6. Mine too. Only travel is left.

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            7. HappySoul says:

              Travel eh! Where to?

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            8. HappySoul says:

              Me it’s simple … Austria, New Zealand and I wanna see northern lights.. that’s it .. simple 😁I wish God will give me time to tick this off ..

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  6. HappySoul says:

    You are the Universe and the Universe is you! πŸ˜ƒ

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    1. The universe is us πŸ˜ƒ

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      1. HappySoul says:

        πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ™ŒπŸ™Œ

        Grass grows on skin and sun burns within .. how do you come up with such lines!! πŸ₯Ί

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        1. Because I was bored πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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          1. HappySoul says:

            Hope you get more bored.. if that can lead to such imagination πŸ˜„

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  7. Nawazish says:

    Why do you wait for something that’s abstract and doesn’t exist, babua?πŸ˜›πŸ˜› You are the entire universe within yourself😏

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    1. HappySoul says:

      Exactly my thoughts

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      1. Ah good 🀣🀣

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        1. Nawazish says:

          Abstraction, nah. Subtraction😏

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            1. Nawazish says:

              Aap multiplication

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            2. Nawazish says:

              Aap trigonometry

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            3. Aap chaos theory

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      2. Nawazish says:

        See you agree to it

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    2. Because I am an abstraction. πŸ˜›

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