Life / bliss


Younger dreams of yesteryears haunt my world. They come to me, calling. I hide underneath the blanket of darkness, afraid to close my eyes. I dare not peek, for I know they can see me.

Closing my eyes to one is opening into another. Life is an aftermath, like a consequence for the sins of my father. The tragedy of birth points to a grave; suffering ends with hope. The death choir goes on as we hum along in silence to the morbid tunes of existential bliss.

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  1. Lia says:

    All these amazing lines together in one darkly hopeful family of awesomeness. ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ‘Œ

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  2. great last line.. ” The death choir goes on as we hum along in silence to the morbid tunes of existential bliss”

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    1. Thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š

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      1. of course! ๐Ÿ’–

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  3. kimmagic says:

    You’ve written so much in one, give me a moment to process it all ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ

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    1. Iโ€™ve given you hours. What did you come up with??

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      1. kimmagic says:

        Quite a few things. This blanket of darkness seems to be what most of us have been hiding under

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        1. Maybe weโ€™re afraid of things we donโ€™t understand or canโ€™t cannot confront.

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          1. kimmagic says:

            It’s true, we are afraid of those things. Couldn’t agree more

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  4. ANANYA says:

    Thinking if I gotta comment or notโ‰๏ธ. Ended up writing this๐Ÿ˜‚. Will give a deep thought to what u have written๐Ÿ˜Œ!

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    1. Ah! Fine. Iโ€™ll be waiting for your response then.

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      1. ANANYA says:

        Sure sure!๐Ÿค˜๐Ÿป๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜‚

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  5. Mermaid says:

    ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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    1. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿค—

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  6. Nathi says:

    โ€œThe tragedy of birth points to a grave; suffering ends with hopeโ€

    Youโ€™re unbelievably amazing brother! And this line๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ

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    1. Thank you sister, I get to read works by people like you, Iโ€™m bound to write a line or two.

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      1. Nathi says:

        Thatโ€™s very kind of you to say, brother ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ™

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  7. akshita1776 says:

    Seriously, how do you write such ahh-ma-zing lines?
    This is fantastic!!

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    1. Spur of the moment ๐Ÿ˜…

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      1. akshita1776 says:

        Wish I could get those spurs too

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        1. Maybe you got them

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  8. Nawazish says:

    Na shaam na savera๐Ÿ˜€

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    1. Andhera hi andheraaaaa

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      1. Nawazish says:

        Areeee sooo jaaaaoooo na

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        1. Galat lyrics firse ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

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          1. Nawazish says:

            Sahi kab gayi?๐Ÿคฆ๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿค”

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            1. Wo bhi sahi ๐Ÿ˜‚

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  9. HappySoul says:

    The tragedy of birth points to a grave; suffering ends with hope – even in my best writing mood, I cannot think of such lines! Itโ€™s awesome Bharath!!!

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    1. Because your best writing mood is far better than mine. Thanks maโ€™am. ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. HappySoul says:

        Oh my you sure know how to compliment .. but seriously.. you are awesome!

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        1. And youโ€™re modest. Thank you. ๐Ÿ™‚

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          1. HappySoul says:

            ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…

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  10. Anushk@ says:

    Existential crisis!! Wow.
    Amazingly written Bharath ๐Ÿ˜
    No doubt why you’re called as Prince of Darkness! You’ve earned that๐Ÿ˜‚

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    1. Haha itโ€™s real, just look around you.
      Iโ€™m not the Prince of darkness, donโ€™t call me that. Iโ€™m a jolly guy. ๐Ÿ˜‚

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