Rhyme for today


Doodle by Aswathy

In the red house lives the red lady; she dances by herself in her red gown, the husband is out of town.

In the blue house lives the short lady; juggling routines, chasing life. She’s got the blues.

The other house isn’t green, concealed amidst the trees; There are flowers and bees but the lady, where is she?

I close my eyes, need not open to see; The skies change colours, those colours are my dreams.

“Where is the purple house lady?” Asked the lady in yellow, “I see her in your eyes, you jolly old fellow.”

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  1. Great play with words. Enjoyed.

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  2. Lia says:

    Very fun ekphrastic. :))

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  3. Mermaid says:

    Last one is so beautiful 🥰

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  4. Nathi says:

    You’re getting super-creative brother!! Last night I was kinda puzzled…but after seeing the doodle now, is it safe to say that I’m a little less puzzled 😂

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    1. Haha! I was getting bored. I expected ridicule. 😂

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  5. akshita1776 says:

    I am sure my younger brother will enjoy this😂😅

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    1. Let me know if he does 😃

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      1. akshita1776 says:

        He does. I just read it out to him and he is going all yellow lady, green lady😂

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        1. Haha how old is he?

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  6. ANANYA says:

    Waiseeee…how much do you charge for the creative writing classes?🤭🤭😂😂

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    1. Kuch bhi 😂😂

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      1. ANANYA says:

        Arre sachi mein😂😂😂

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        1. Aur Kuch ma’am??

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          1. ANANYA says:

            Nahi! Bas itna he janana tha😂🤭
            And and and, the poem is cute!🥺🤞🏻❤

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            1. Poem is cute? Sachi?

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            2. ANANYA says:

              Yes! Perfect for small children🤞🏻❤😌

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            3. Exactly what I intended it to be 😂

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            4. Ananya🧩 says:

              Imma gonna try and read it out to some small children I meet🤪😂😂🤘🏻

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            5. Tell me what happens

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            6. Ananya🧩 says:

              Sure!😂. I actually met a kid today who was crying, but my bad😕 the phone’s server was down and I couldn’t read this poem out for him😔😖😖.

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            7. Phones these days! They don’t know the value of a human relations!

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            8. Ananya🧩 says:

              Ayyee!!😐 I managed to stop him from crying anymore but I wanted your poem as a backup🤭🤪🤪

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            9. Ayye? Malayali??

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            10. Ananya🧩 says:

              Nah! Odia😂🤘🏻. I am living in Bangalore since a long time so this word has now become a habit of mine😶😂. What about you? Where do you belong from??

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            11. Ah the first odiya I’ve spoken to. Pleasure, ma’am. I’m from Hyderabad. I say ayyo. 😂

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            12. Ananya🧩 says:

              Stop calling me Ma’am😂😂, it sounds weird!!! I am pretty sure I am younger than you🤭😂😂 so just refer me by my name or it will be my pleasure if you van come up with a nickname!🤭😂. Ayyo even I say this while being with my friends!🤘🏻🤪😂

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            13. Ayyo! You sure are. Ananya then. 😂

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            14. Ananya🧩 says:

              Ayyyooo! Okay then😂😂😂

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        1. This is one of my worst. Thanks though. 😅

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            1. Always in disagreement. 😂

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            2. 🤣🤣🤣🤣

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  7. Anushk@ says:

    I can see her in your eyes too😍🤭
    Ahem ahem!!

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    1. Can you? Would you point me in her direction?

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      1. Anushk@ says:

        Oh yessssssssssss😃

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  8. Nawazish says:

    Purple lady in aankhe!🤭🤭

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    1. I don’t see anyone 🥺

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      1. Nawazish says:

        Look in the mirror

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          1. Nawazish says:

            When did you become invisible?

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            1. I close my eyes and see nothing

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            2. Nawazish says:

              If you close your eyes and see something that’s abnormal

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            3. A man can’t even dream??

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            4. Nawazish says:

              Dreams are subconscious….I am talking about conscious seeing with eyes close

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            5. Nawazish says:

              Those are with eyes open

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            6. Nawazish says:

              Kyu hatttttt

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            7. Nawazish says:

              Hum jaaa…wapas nahi aa😔😔

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            8. Nawazish says:

              Sach me ja🥺🥺

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  9. HappySoul says:

    What is this I say 😂…
    on the other hand, you should start a course on creative writing

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    1. I was just messing around 🤣🤣

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      1. HappySoul says:

        Was the doodle there yesterday night …? I missed it .. it’s awesome !

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        1. It wasn’t. I was asleep when Aswathy sent it to me and I added it as soon as I woke up.

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          1. HappySoul says:

            Ahh ok! Now this post actually got some colours 😂

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            1. Right? It’s a lot better now.

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            2. HappySoul says:

              I agree! Yet I’ve read it quite a few times already and the last lines has your signature ..

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            3. Haha thank you for being so generous with your words

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